高分求英文翻译

Question

请英文高手翻译下面文字，要求翻译质量较高。
写作一直以来都是英语学习的重要输出方式，是学生英语水平的重要体现，也是各种考试必不可少的组成部分。一篇好文章, 应符合以下标准: 内容切题,语义连贯, 句段衔接自然, 基本无语言错误。那么,正确使用英语衔接手段是写好文章的必备要条件。而大学非英语专业学生的作文往往思路狭窄，文章结构松散，缺乏逻辑性，文章中的连接词语使用错误，从而文章的联贯性较差，影响作文整体的质量。英语中的连接词作为语篇衔接的一种手段，对篇章的衔接、连贯起着重要的作用。随着计算机的应用和大型语料库及检索软件的出现，语料库方法作为一种新的研究方法被越来越广泛地应用于语言教学方面的研究。
本文依据语料库采用定量及定性分析相结合的方法，旨在揭示中国非英语专业学生使用连接词的主要错误类型。本文通过应用Antconc3.2计算软件，对在中国学习者语料库的子库St3、St4出现的使用错误的连接词的使用上进行定量和定性分析研究，并由此了解其目前的大学英语写作连接词的常见错误类型，以及为分析出错原因提供依据，并针对分析结果对提出新的大学英语写作教学模式。
谢绝机器翻译和网页翻译！ 欢迎英语高手！

Answer 1

Writing has always been the most immportant way of output for English learning, which is an important reflection of the English level of the students and also an integrated part for all kinds of exams. A good composition should fufill the following standards: the content should be revelant to the topic; the meaning is fluent; the paragraphs cohere naturally; basically there is no language mistake. Therefore, it's a necessary requirement for writing a good composition to use the conhensive means properly. However, the composition of students who are not majoring in English is always of narrow thoughts, loose structure,lackness of logic and using conjuctions wrongly in the composition which leads to a bad consistency of the composition and affects the quality of the whole composition. The conjuctions in English play importanr roles in cohere and link up the paragraphs as a cohensive mean. Along with application of the computer as well as the emerge of large corpora and searching softwares, the way of corpora is being used more and more widely to the research of language teaching as a new research method.

This paper adopts the method of quatification combined with characterization, aiming at revealing the major types of mistakes made by the students who are not majoring at English. It gives a analysi of quatification and characterization of the mistakes appeared in the sub-corpora St3 , St4 of Chinese learners by using the computer software of Antconc3.2. It will also helps to know the common types of mistakes appeared in the writing of university English writing and offers back-up for the analysis of the reason of making mistakes, also it will come out a new teaching mode of university English writing according to the result.

楼主，手工翻译，请检查发分（翻译的很辛苦的）

Answer 2

Writing has been learning English way, is the important output of students' English level, and is also the important embodiment of an indispensable part of the exams. A good article, should meet the following criteria: the content and other pertinent, semantic coherence and cohesion is fundamental for natural language mistakes. So, the right to use English cohesion is essential to good writing. Instead of non-english major students often thought, the composition and structure of narrow loosely connected the lack logicality, use words, then the article tends to poorer, affect the overall quality of composition. The English word as the cohesion of a kind of means of discourse coherence, plays an important role. With the application of computer and software of large-scale corpus and retrieval, as a kind of new method of corpus research methods are widely used in language teaching research.
Based on the quantitative and qualitative analysis of corpus USES the method of combining Chinese to reveal non-english major students use words and main types of errors. Through the application of Antconc3.2 calculation software, in China the learner corpus, St4 St3 library of using the wrong words on the use of quantitative and qualitative analysis, and understand the current college English writing words, as well as the type of mistake common error analysis, and provide basis for reason analysis proposed new college English writing teaching mode.

Answer 3

Writing has been a study of english important output of the way, are students of english important, it is also a necessary part of the examination. a good article, the following criteria: the content relevant and semantics, a period of course, there is no connect basic language. then, with the correct use of english is written good essay necessary to conditions. college students of english for professionals often thought of the composition and structure of essays, lack of logic, In connection with the wrong words used by being taken of the inferior quality of the composition overall, impact. in english of latin words as "a device connecting to the next chapter," plays an important role. as the use of computers and large, material and retrieval in your software libraries and the language materials as a new method is more widely used in language teaching research.
This article is based on the language used for library quantitative and a combination of methods to bring an english chinese majors use a major mistakes. this type through the application. 2 antconc3 the software, on the learner of library material library st4 st3, the use of the wrong connection use the word on the quantitation study and understand it, and the college english writing a common type of error, and for error. And understanding of its college english writing a common type of error, and provide for error, and analysis of results in the new college english teaching writing.

Answer 4

is the important output of students' English level, and is also the important embodiment of an indispensable part of the exams. A good article, should meet the following criteria: the content and other pertinent, semantic coherence and cohesion is fundamental for natural language mistakes. So, the right to use English cohesion is essential to good writing. Instead of non-english major students often thought, the composition and structure of narrow loosely connected the lack logicality, use words, then the article tend to poorer, affect the overall quality of composition. The English word as the cohesion of a kind of means of discourse coherence, an important role. With the application of computer and software of large-scale corpus and retrieval, as a kind of new method of corpus research methods are widely used in language teaching research.
Based on the quantitative and qualitative analysis of corpus USES the method of combining Chinese to reveal non-english major students use words and main types of errors. Through the application of Antconc3.2 calculation software, in China the learner corpus, St4 St3 library of using the wrong words on the use of quantitative and qualitative analysis, and understand the current college English writing words, as well as the type of mistake common error analysis, and provide basis for reason analysis proposed new college English writing teaching mode.

Answer 5

That
you
can
keep
going
Long
after
you
think
you
can’t
你可以超过你原以为不可能的极限而继续走下去.
I've
learned
——
that
regardless
of
how
hot
and
steamy
a
relationship
is
at
first,
the
passion
fades
and
there
had
better
be
something
else
to
take
its
place.我终于了解——不论起初的关系如何热络，热情总会退却，而且总会有其它的东西取代它.

Answer 6

That
you
can
keep
going
Long
after
you
think
you
can’t
你可以继续走下去远超过你所以为的极限
I've
learned
——
that
regardless
of
how
hot
and
steamy
a
relationship
is
at
first,
the
passion
fades
and
there
had
better
be
something
else
to
take
its
place.
我终于了解——不论起初的关系如何热络，热情总会退却，最好有其它的东西可以取代它。