请帮我翻译成英语口语（翻译软件勿进）

Question

我在上海已经8年了，除了糟糕的天气，我很喜欢这个城市。这是一个很有发展前景的城市。
与其他的应届生和年轻人不一样，我已经31岁了，并且已经结婚，有一个孩子，可爱的女儿。也许我并没有其他的人有更多的选择的机会。但我我同他们一样，有充沛的精力，有对生活的热情，有敏捷的头脑。
我本科学油画专业，但因为现实和其他的一些因素，这几年来我一直都是从事设计工作。因为我有一个宝宝，所以，作为一个母亲，我没有太大的野心。我更想稳定下来。（我希望可以进高校。而更高文凭是必须的。）
其次，我喜欢设计，在做设计时我总是充满了热情。因为这几个愿意我考研在业余的时间我喜欢看书，尤其是科幻类的书。我也是一个爱幻想的人。从小都是对世界对人生充满了幻想。现在依然如此。除此之外，我喜欢运动，篮球，羽毛球，都是我喜欢的。
大学的生活是让我难忘的。我是一个优秀的学生，在专业，体育，学生工作方面都很不错。
这几年，我自学了网页设计制作，平面辅助设计，动画设计，工作也与此相关关。我很喜欢我正在做的事情。
在经过了半年的准备后，很幸运的我能够在这里回答你们的问题。如果我有机会进入这所大学（在艺术领域很有影响力的学院）继续下面的学习，相信我有更大的潜力。不这一切，不仅仅为自己，也是为我的家人。
好，这是关于我。谢谢各位老师。

问题补充
不要翻译软件翻译的。我有一定的基础。
好，谢谢 不好意思，
拜托，一楼的：有点水平好不好？？都说了，我有一定的基础，别拿翻译软件来唬我，

Answer 1

Although sometimes I find the weather in Shanghai a little troublesome,eight-year life here has made me deeply in love with Shanghai,a city with a great potential for development.
Unlike other this-year graduates or young people,I am already 31 years old and get married as well, with a lovely daughter.Perhaps there are fewer chances available for me than for others,but I am energetic,passinate about life and mentally sharp, just like everybody else.
I majored in oil painting back when I was an undergraduate.It's hard to erase the life in college where I worked hard to be an excellent student who did an amazing job in my profession,sports and students' union work. However,the reality and some other factors have kept me engaged in design work.As a mother who has a daugher,I am trying to be stable rather than ambitious.(I hope to work for a college,which means a higher diploma,or rather,the postgraduate study is a must.)
More importantly,I have a strong passion for design.I feel like a ball of fire when I am doing design work.This is one of the reasons why I need to take the postgraduate entrance examination.And I love reading books at my leisure,especially the ones about science fiction because I am imaginative. I was full of imagination about the world and life from childhood.I am still inclined to imagine tings to this day. Besides,I am fond of sports,like basketball,badminton,etc.
I've been for several years learning web design and production, auxiliary plane and anamation on my own.Obviously,these are not only closely related to my occupation but also are what I've been really enjoying.After six months' preparation,I'm genuinely honored and lucky to stand before all of you to answer your questions.If I've got such a great chance to further my education in the college which is quite influential and prestigious in the realm of art, I strongly believe that I will have a greater potential to develop.All this is for my family as well as for myself.
That's what is about me,a wife and mother who loves her family;a worker who is devoted to her design work;a student who is eager for more knowledge,challenges and self-improvement.Thanks for every teacher's listening.

终于翻完了。
楼主参加复试的时候要注意尽量把句子说的漂亮舒服点，不要太难也不要太简单，刚刚合适就行。我在翻译的过程中适当结合了难句和简单句。
因为这几个愿意我考研在业余的时间我喜欢看书，尤其是科幻类的书。
楼主这个话我看不明白，所以就按照我的意思去理解。另外我觉得楼主在写这个的时候要更加连贯些比较好,有些地方显得稍显混乱。
我不知道楼主在写第四段的时候到底是在描写大学时的事情为主还是描写大学过后的事情为主。我在翻译的时候稍微组合了一下句子以便需要。总之我觉得楼主应该多对你的文章进行修改思考使得其更加流畅连贯。因为没有经过的你同意就修改原文显得很不礼貌，所以我在翻译的时候尽量把一些可以重新组合的句子进行了重新组合。例如把大学生活难忘那一段放在了第二段，使内容显得紧凑。但是结尾的时候我用了排比句，既能对前文作了简单的概括，又能增强句式。
楼主加油！！祝你成功哈！！

Answer 2

I’ve been living in Shanghai for 8 years. I like Shanghai even though sometimes the weather is really terrible. I believe Shanghai will have a more splendid future.

Unlike other candidates, I am 31 years old. I am married and have a very cute daughter. Life is hard for me because I don’t have many choices but I still work with energy and live with passion. The most important is that I am smart and I learn fast. (与原文稍有出入，这是电影穿prada的恶魔里，女主角应聘时的话。)

Now, I’d like to talk about my education background and work experience. I have a bachelor’s degree in oil painting. But I did not work in this field at all because of few job opportunities available and personal reasons. so I became a designer. (这里可以补充一下，你是什么设计师，建筑？室内装饰？还可以说说你的作品得到什么奖或者客户有什么评论。). I prefer a stable job and live a peaceful life because i am a mother. I don’t have strong desire to achieve something, such as fame, money or power. What I am expecting is to be a university teacher, so it is necessary to have postgraduate education.

Next, I’d like to talk about my personal preference. Firstly, I do like designing. I always feel I am full of passion and energy when I am doing design. Secondly, I like reading, especially science fictions. Also, I am a dreamer. When I was a little girl, I had dreamde about the world, the life. And now I still like imagining. I think that is good for my design. Besides, I enjoy sports, like basketball, badminton.

I am a person who is good at learning. I was an excellent student when I studied in my university because I am successful in many areas including my major, sport competition and students’ union work. (这里最好说具体，比如学生工作上有什么成功的地方，当了什么职务等。另，大学生活是让我难忘的删掉，与本段主题无关。仅供参考。) I taught myself webpage design, auxiliary planar design, and animation design, which is closely related to my work. I enjoy doing this.

Finally, I think I am lucky to be here and talk with all of you. I have been waiting for this for years and prepared for this interview for 6 months. I am looking forward to having opportunities to study at this great university to continue my research. I believe I have potential in art. I do all of this not only for me, but also for my families.

That’s me, a wife, a mother, a designer, an imaginer, and a to-be student. Thank you, sir/madam. (稍作改动，结尾更令人印象深刻。)

楼主在准备这样的个人介绍的时候，一定要注意逻辑性，每一段都要有主题和主题句，围绕主题具体说明。总只逻辑性一定要强，不要东拉西扯，这也是面试时候考官看重的。祝你成功！

Answer 3

我在上海已经8年了，除了糟糕的天气，我很喜欢这个城市。这是一个很有发展前景的城市。
I have been in Shanghai for 8 years, I very like this city except its awful weather. This is a city full of development prospect.
与其他的应届生和年轻人不一样，我已经31岁了，并且已经结婚，有一个孩子，可爱的女儿。也许我并没有其他的人有更多的选择的机会。但我我同他们一样，有充沛的精力，有对生活的热情，有敏捷的头脑。
Different from other graduate student and young man, I was 31 years old and have been married; I have a child, a lovely girl. Perhaps I have no more opportunity for choice as the same as the others. But I have abundant energy, passion of life and smart brain just as like as them.
我本科学油画专业，但因为现实和其他的一些因素，这几年来我一直都是从事设计工作。因为我有一个宝宝，所以，作为一个母亲，我没有太大的野心。我更想稳定下来。（我希望可以进高校。而更高文凭是必须的。）
My major is painting on the university, but for the factors of reality or some others, I always do the design work these years. Because I have a baby, as a mother I have no so big ambition. I like steady even more. (I hope I can enter to the college. And the higher diploma must be needed.)
其次，我喜欢设计，在做设计时我总是充满了热情。因为这几个愿意我考研在业余的时间我喜欢看书，尤其是科幻类的书。我也是一个爱幻想的人。从小都是对世界对人生充满了幻想。现在依然如此。除此之外，我喜欢运动，篮球，羽毛球，都是我喜欢的。
The other, I like design, I was full of passion while I did design. 因为这几个愿意我考研。I like reading in the spare time even the science fiction books. I am a fancy woman too. I filled with romantic about life and the world from little age till now. Beside this I like sport, basket ball and badminton are the sport I like.
大学的生活是让我难忘的。我是一个优秀的学生，在专业，体育，学生工作方面都很不错。
这几年，我自学了网页设计制作，平面辅助设计，动画设计，工作也与此相关关。我很喜欢我正在做的事情。
The college life was unforgettable for me. I was a excellent student, and was not bad in the major, sport, or student work. I have taught myself Site Design and Development, Graphic-aided Design, Animation Design these years, and my work was related to it. I very like what I was doing.
在经过了半年的准备后，很幸运的我能够在这里回答你们的问题。如果我有机会进入这所大学（在艺术领域很有影响力的学院）继续下面的学习，相信我有更大的潜力。不这一切，不仅仅为自己，也是为我的家人。
I feel very lucky that I can answer you here after several years preparing. If I have an opportunity to enter this university (a powerful academy on the real of art), and continue the following study. I believe I will have even more potential. All these are not only for me but for my family.
好，这是关于我。谢谢各位老师。
Well, that is about me. Thanks every teacher.

Answer 4

你是准备做presentation吧，我翻的较简单、口语化些，供参考！

Good Morning Professors/ interviewers,

Firstly, thank you very much for giving me this opportunity of interview.

我在上海已经8年了，除了糟糕的天气，我很喜欢这个城市。这是一个很有发展前景的城市。
I’ve been living Shanghai 8 years so far, generally speaking, I do like everything in this city except the lousy weather, the city is full of challenge and hope as I feel.

与其他的应届生和年轻人不一样，我已经31岁了，并且已经结婚，有一个孩子，可爱的女儿。也许我并没有其他的人有更多的选择的机会。但我我同他们一样，有充沛的精力，有对生活的热情，有敏捷的头脑。

I might be different with other candidates, I am 31 already, and I have a lovely daughter.
Perhaps I don’t have too much opportunities for further choice as same as others, but I am still energetic, flexible and full of passion in life.

我本科学油画专业，但因为现实和其他的一些因素，这几年来我一直都是从事设计工作。因为我有一个宝宝，所以，作为一个母亲，我没有太大的野心。我更想稳定下来。（我希望可以进高校。而更高文凭是必须的。）
Even though my major is oil painting, but somehow I’ve been working on designing in recent years.
As an unambitious mother, I just wanna my life be stable, then I will have enough spare time to take care my baby. (Of Crouse, I do hope to improve myself with superior diploma.)

其次，我喜欢设计，在做设计时我总是充满了热情。因为这几个愿意我考研在业余的时间我喜欢看书，尤其是科幻类的书。我也是一个爱幻想的人。从小都是对世界对人生充满了幻想。现在依然如此。除此之外，我喜欢运动，篮球，羽毛球，都是我喜欢的。
Designing is my favorite work, that’s why I always be passionate on it.
To reading science friction novel is another way to fill up spare time during the preparation for examination of postgraduate study.
Since I was a little girl, I’ve been fantasizing most of beautiful things in my life and my world. In addition, I do like to play basketball, badminton as well.

大学的生活是让我难忘的。我是一个优秀的学生，在专业，体育，学生工作方面都很不错。
这几年，我自学了网页设计制作，平面辅助设计，动画设计，工作也与此相关关。我很喜欢我正在做的事情。
What a memorable life in my university, I am not only good at my major but also doing great at sport and interpersonal relationship with my classmates.
As you know, I am very interested about what I am doing, such as the designing of webpage, graphic and animation. (没必要告诉别人你是自学的吧！毕竟你已经掌握了这种特长！)

在经过了半年的准备后，很幸运的我能够在这里回答你们的问题。如果我有机会进入这所大学（在艺术领域很有影响力的学院）继续下面的学习，相信我有更大的潜力。这一切，不仅仅为自己，也是为我的家人。
I think I am very lucky to be here, if I may have the opportunity to enter my dreaming university , i am sure it will avail me to dig out more potential, broadening my horizons and creating my values gradually.

好，这是关于我。谢谢各位老师。
Well, that’s about me.
Thank you very much again, and wish you all will have a great day!

Answer 5

本人英语专业,用翻译软件翻了一下,本人认真修改过了,请楼主核查!
I was in Shanghai has been eight years, in addition to bad weather, I love this city. This is a promising city.
With other final year students and young people do not like, I have 31 years old and have been married, there is a child, lovely daughter. Maybe I did not other people have more choice. But I like them, I have abundant energy, a passion for life, there are agile mind.
I had oil paintings of professional science, but because the reality and other factors, which over the years I have always been engaged in design work. Because I have a baby, so, as a mother, I do not have much ambition. I would also like to stabilize. (I hope I can enter college. While a higher diploma is required.)
Secondly, I like the design, doing the design I always had passion. Because I have a few willing to PubMed at the time I like to read an amateur, especially sci-fi type book. I am also a love of illusions. Since childhood and life of the world is full of fantasy. Is still the case. In addition, I love sports, basketball, badminton, are my favorite.
University life is so unforgettable. I am a good student, professional, sports, student work pretty good.
In recent years, I am self-taught in web design production, graphic-aided design, animation design, work related customs. I really like I was doing.
After half a year of preparation, it was very fortunate I am to be here to answer your questions. If I had the opportunity to enter the university (very influential in the arts college) to continue following the study, I believe I have a greater potential. Not all of this, not only for ourselves, but for my family.
Well, this is about me. Thank you teacher.