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Under the star, we look into the distance
Do you still remember the doll which you loved once? Do you still remember the fairy tale which you had ever been told? Do you still remember the buddy who ever played with you?
When we grown up,maybe we have already forgot them.
Little prince is an innocent child who could see sheep through the walls of boxes and he is very fond of sunsets.He also likes to ask questions.Do you think it is similar to us who ever was a child?
He reminds me of my chilhood,which seems to be faraway from me.Of course,I don’t need dolls and toys now. I don’t know whether I am a grown-up,I don’t want to be a grown-up but it must.
The more older we are, the more trouble we meet. I hate those who only cares about figures.But it is reality.Perhaps I am a little like the grown-ups .I have had to grow old.
Time can not come back, we have had to grow up.Maybe someday we find we became a businessman who has so much to do and is only concerned with matters of consequence. Nothing is more important than to earn money. We focused on what I get and forget how to enjoy the life even how to laugh. We became never satisfied .The grass is greener on the other side.
Today we have higher buildings and wider highways,but shorter temperaments and narrower points of view;
We have multiplied out possessions,but reduced out values;
We have conquered the uter space,but not our inner space;
I think we should stop our steps sometime. Just like the little prince, because life is not a race,it should be a journey. On the path of growing,we try to understand what is love and duty ,trying to be tamed and tame others. As the fox said “It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is the essential is invisible to the eye.” Under the star, we look into the distance.There is a little prince on the Asteroid B-612.There are five hundred million little bells…

Answer 1

TOO FEW SCORES.

Under the star, we look into the distance
满天繁星下,我们仰望虚空
Do you still remember the doll which you loved once?
你还记得你曾经喜欢的玩具娃娃吗?
Do you still remember the fairy tale which you had ever been told?
你可还记得曾经听过的童话?
Do you still remember the buddy who ever played with you?
你是否还记得曾与你一起玩耍的小伙伴?
When we grown up,maybe we have already forgot them.
当我们长大成人,我们可能也已经忘记了他们.
Little prince is an innocent child who could see sheep through the walls of boxes and he is very fond of sunsets.
小王子是个单纯的小孩,他能看到盒子里的绵羊,他还喜欢日落
He also likes to ask questions.
他同样喜欢问问题
Do you think it is similar to us who ever was a child?
你是不是觉的跟我们小时候一样呢?
He reminds me of my chilhood,which seems to be faraway from me.
他唤醒我对童年的回忆,那对我来说似乎久远而朦胧.
Of course,I don’t need dolls and toys now.
当然,我不再需要娃娃和玩具了
I don’t know whether I am a grown-up,I don’t want to be a grown-up but it must.
我不知道我是否已长大成人,我不想,但是必须.
The more older we are, the more trouble we meet.
年龄越大,烦恼越多
I hate those who only cares about figures.
我讨厌那些只留意数字的人.
But it is reality.
但这就是事实
Perhaps I am a little like the grown-ups.
可能我只是有点像大人了.
I have had to grow old.
可我不得不长大
Time can not come back, we have had to grow up.
时光不能回流,我们不得不长大
Maybe someday we find we became a businessman who has so much to do and is only concerned with matters of consequence.
可能有一天我们发现自己成了一个商人有许多重要的事情要做,但也仅此而已.
Nothing is more important than to earn money.
没有比赚钱更重要的事了
We focused on what I get and forget how to enjoy the life even how to laugh.
我们只关心自己得到了什么而忘了如何享受生活,甚至忘了怎么笑.
We became never satisfied.
我们越来越不满足
The grass is greener on the other side.
另一边的草更绿.(那边的山更高)
Today we have higher buildings and wider highways,but shorter temperaments and narrower points of view;
现在我们的楼更高了,路更宽了;性格却更急躁了,观点更狭隘了.
We have multiplied out possessions,but reduced out values;
我们财富增加了,价值却减少了
We have conquered the uter space,but not our inner space;
我们征服了太空,而不是内心
I think we should stop our steps sometime.
我想我有时我们应该停下脚步.
Just like the little prince, because life is not a race,it should be a journey.
就像那个小王子,因为生活不是赛跑,而应该是旅途.
On the path of growing,we try to understand what is love and duty ,trying to be tamed and tame others.
在成长的道路上,我们试图理解什么是爱和责任,试图驯服别人,或者被人驯服
As the fox said “It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is the essential is invisible to the eye.”
就像狐狸说的:"只有用心才能看到眼睛看不到的本质."
Under the star, we look into the distance.
满天繁星下,我们仰望虚空
There is a little prince on the Asteroid B-612.There are five hundred million little bells…
在B-612小行星上有个小王子.那里有五亿只小铃铛……