我是一名5年级的小学生，英语口语不是很好....

Question

我是一名5年级的小学生，口语不是很好，下周要比赛，准备英语自我介绍，新颖点的，全面点的，不要太幼稚的，最好给带中文翻译！急啊！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！

Answer 1

Hello，Everyone，今天，我很荣幸我能有机会站在这裏向你们介绍我自己，我出生在上海，来自上大附中，是一个有责任心的人，对事对人都十分负责，虽然未能在这次高考中取得好成绩，但是却并不因此看轻自己，我热爱篮球，并且喜欢阅读书籍，最后我想说的是，我从小向往蓝天，希望拥有翅膀能高高飞，因此我选择到这裏来寻求一个机会，谢谢大家。
hello everyone。today i'm honoured to have this opportunity to introduce to you about myself。i was born in shanghai and i come from the high school of shanghai university。i am a person who has a highly responsibility。it was a pity that i didn't achieve my goal in this year’s final exam but i’m not going to belittle myself。I love basketball, and like to read books as well。finally，i just want to say i have a passion in flying in the sky and i hope myself can get a chance here to make my dream come true。thank you！
自己再请英语老师帮忙改一改，就OK了~~
好好背啊！！
加油，祝你今后顺利！！

Answer 2

万事靠自己~~~~~~--------