第1个回答 2008-10-29
It was a bad day for me. I had a terrible stomachache waking up in the morning, so I went to the nearby hospital for some medicine. Everything was against me when I had arrived at the school; firstly, I slipped and fell at the gate, bumped someone too. Then I went to the office for hot water to take my medicine, there was a long queue, but when it’s my turn, the water ran out, it’s terrible! The bell rang, I rushed back to the class with no time to prepare for the dictation. I felt that I had performed poorly after the dictation, 4mistakes out of 13. I was called to the office, angrily teacher scolded, ‘This is your dictation, take back and write some more.’ Maybe you’re not aware that I had reproached myself, I rewrote the 13 words for 20 times. But when I handed in, you still insisted to see my parents; I ran out of office with my eyes wet, when I reached home, my mother was on the phone, so I had decided to tell her later. My mother looked very sad when she hanged up, so I asked why. She said, ‘your grandpa is seriously ill.’ I felt awful, so I didn’t tell her about it because I wouldn’t want to hurt her. I hope teacher will forgive me and give me one more chance! I promise I shall behave!
第2个回答 2008-11-11
今天是坏的一天,早上起来,胃口就疼痛难忍。去了附近的医院,并拿了药。到了学校好像什么事都和我对着干,进校门摔跤,还撞了人。又去办公室接热水吃药,那里还有一大堆人。好不容易轮到我还没水了。真是糟糕透了!上课铃响了,我匆忙地跑回教室,单词还没有背 默写完之后,觉得默的太差了 ,结果默了13个 错了4个。我被叫到办公室 于师大怒道:“这就是你默的单词!回去写去!”也许您不知道我也很自责 就把13个单词每个都写了20便,去您那交的时候 你还是要求请我的家长,我含着泪跑出了办公室,回到家妈妈正在接电话,我想一会告诉他这件事。妈妈挂了电话后很悲痛 。我问他怎麽啦,他说:“你姥爷病了,很严重。”我心里也很难受,我不想在打击我的母亲,所以没有告诉他事情真相.
我希望于师能谅解我,再给我最后一次机会!我一定会好好把握!
第3个回答 2008-11-06
楼主吖..这可是我辛辛苦苦亲自手译的成果..你们老师看叻八成会原谅你.(如果他相信这是你写的话.)..绝对和机译或马马虎虎地手译有质的区别.!!
P.S.楼主你的原文写成这样是为了避免某些不法分子机译吗..高.实在是高.!!.电脑绝对看不懂..
today must be the worst day i have ever had. First i went to hospital nearby for some medicine because of the terrible stomachache. everything seemed to be against with me since then like i fell down unreasonably and i suddenly crashed into someone. i couldn't even easily get some hot water to eat my medicine because the water was run out by other people although i had waited for ages! how dawn!
bell's ringing,i rushed to the classroom without any preparation of the english vocabulary test. expectedly, i got 13 of 14 words wrong. owing to my disgusting test result, my teacher got really angry and asked me to copy them several times. i felt so sorry that i copied them for over 20 times. however, u didn't forgive and still asked my parents to come which made me too sad to stop crying. having gone back home, my mum was really upset and frustrated about my seriously ill grandfather. i didnt tell her the fault i made just because i didn't want to hurt my poor mother anymore.
miss/mr yu,could u please give me the last one chance which i would never miss it?
第4个回答 2008-10-30
Today is bad day in the morning, the appetite for pain. To a nearby hospital and took drugs. In the school as if nothing and I oppose, Jinxiao Men wrestling, were also hit. Office of the hot water then went to take medicine, where there are a lot of people. Finally my turn to the still water. Really bad! Class rang, I rushed back to the classroom, the words have not yet back after dictation, that's too bad the silent, resulting in a silent 13 wrong 4. I was summoned to the office of the division was furious: "This is the silence of your words! To go back and write!" Maybe you do not know that I am very self-reproach had 13 words each of the 20 will write to you to pay it When you request or ask my parents, my tears ran out of the office, home mother is answer the phone, I would like to tell him this. Mother hung up the phone after the very sad. I asked him how it, he said: "Grandpa you sick, very serious." I was also very difficult subject, I do not want to blow my mother did not tell him the truth.
I hope that in the division will be able to understand me and give me one last chance! I will make good use of
如果不喜欢可以写:
I had a terrible day today. I woke up this morning having a stomachache. So I had to get some medicine in a hospital nearby. After I went to school, everything seemed to go against me. I fell down at the school gate and ran into someone. I went to the office to fetch some hot water to take medicine, and there was a long queue.Finally my turn came but the water had run out too. It was terrible! I hurried to the classroom on the bell having no time for reviewing the new words. After the dictation, I felt very bad. It turned to be 4 wrong out of 13. I was called to the teacher's office. The teacher was irritated,"This is your work! Go back to write!" Perhaps you didn't know I feel ashamed myself and copy every word of the 13 twenty times and turned it back to you. But you still called my parents. I ran out of the office with tears. When back home mom was answering the telephone, so I decided to tell her later. After she hung up with grief. I asked why, she said:"Your grandpa is seriouly ill." I felt bad and wouldn't like to add to her sadness, thus didn't tell her the truth.
I hope teacher could understand me and forgive me. Give me last one chance, and I promise I will behave better.
第5个回答 2008-11-02
Today is bad one day, in the morning gets up, the appetite is hard to endure on the ache. Has gone to the nearby hospital, and has taken the medicine. Has resembled any matter to the school to treat with me is doing, enters the school gate wrestling, but also has hit the human. Also goes to the office to meet the hot water to take a drug, there also has a big pile of person. Was one's turn me not to have the water with great difficulty. Passed really bad! Attended class the bell to make a sound, I ran back the classroom hurriedly, after the word have not carried wrote down from memory, thought that silent has been too bad, finally has written down from memory 13 mistakenly 4. I call to be angry to office Yu Shi said: “this is your silent word! Goes back writes!”Perhaps you did not know that I also very much rebuked oneself to write 13 word each 20 then, went to your that junction time you requested to invite me the guardian, I hold the tear to run the office, returned to family mother to answer the telephone, I thought that one will tell him this matter. After mother has made the telephone call, is very sorrowful. I asked how he, he did say: “your grandfather has gotten sick, is very serious.”I am also very at heart uncomfortable, I do not want in attack my mother, therefore has not told him the truth. I hoped that Yu Shineng forgives me, gives me again the last opportunity! I certainly will grasp well!
我问了我所有的英语老师,不给我没有道理啊!
老大!~~~