批改英语作文
We are surprise the scene that a duck mother is begging eagerly monkeyteacher for purpose teaching the child to climb the tree. It is not a fantasy ,because there are many similar phenomenon from society which concluding a lotof parents having a hope their childwould become achievement . we all must confront with the problem: how to dealwith the education hard and how should parents do when they paly a role whichin a helper toward child or children’s friends?
We all know only thecondition along with the correct way would go to the goal , oneself want to dowithout a ask of one else .when individual and interest are absent from a student ,it might be a fail,which not only wastes many resource but also ruins one’s confidence. “ I don’twant to study” just exist in the child’s mind and teachers and parentsdon’t know the truth ,which is critical in making the whole plan .
The more giving ,fail the interest and individual ,the moreworse to happened. living in a incorrect situation concluding a wrong teacher anda short-sighted parent, is a crazy education which drives child go to the edge. It must be impossible to reap profitwhen child go to the first wrong step. try to make sure that child having a chance in personality as a free childcan fly without consideration. I am firmly convinced that under the change ofopinion ,the parent would wiping the blind education completely thoughchallenge should not underestimated ,the achievement will appear in the nearfuture.
We are surprise the scene
that a duck mother is begging eagerly monkeyteacher for purpose teaching the
child to climb the tree.
[教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[拼写错误] monkeyteacher
拼写错误，可替换选项为：monkey teacher, monkey-teacher, monkeyed
[低频警示] a duck mother 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[低频警示] surprise the scene
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: ask, beg, demand,
require, request, implore, claim, pray, entreat 均有“要求，请求”之意。
ask:
最普通用词，指向对方提出要求或请求，长、晚辈，上下级之间都可使用。
beg:
指恳切地或再三地请求或要求，常含低三下四意味，也多用于应酬场合。
demand:
一般指理直气壮地提出强烈要求，或坚持不让对方拒绝的要求。
require:
强调根据事业、需要或纪律、法律等而提出的要求。
request:
正式用词，指非常正式，有礼貌的请求或恳求，多含担心因种种原因对方不能答应的意味。
implore:
书面用词，着重指迫切、焦急或痛苦地恳求或哀求，常含较强的感情色彩。
claim:
指有权或宣称有权得到而公开提出的要求。
pray:
语气庄重，指热情、诚恳和敬祈的要求，现不很常用。
entreat:
泛指一般“恳求或哀求”，含企图说服对方或用热烈的请求软化反对意见的意味。
1.2
It is not a fantasy ,
because there are many similar phenomenon from society which concluding a lotof
parents having a hope their childwould become achievement .
[教师点评]
[搭配错误] 搭配不当，become
achievement不规范，建议修改。
常见的系动词用法错误，点击查看。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[拼写错误] childwould 拼写错误，可替换选项为：child
would, child-would, childhood
[拼写错误] lotof 拼写错误，可替换选项为：lot of,
lot-of, loot
1.3
we all must confront with
the problem: how to dealwith the education hard and how should parents do when
they paly a role whichin a helper toward child or children's friends?
[教师点评]
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[句子错误] 请注意句首单词首字母大写
[拼写错误] whichin 拼写错误，可替换选项为：which in,
which-in, witching
[拼写错误] dealwith 拼写错误，可替换选项为：deal
with, deal-with, Duluth
[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有“孩子”之意。
baby:
日常用词，一般指从刚出生的婴儿到满两岁的或非常小的孩子，常含钟爱意味。
child:
普通用词，含义广，无感情色彩。泛指从胎儿、婴儿到10岁左右的儿童。
infant:
书面用词，狭义指出生后到两岁的小孩，广义指7岁以下的孩子；法律上则指未到法定年龄。
youngster:
泛指任何年龄的儿童或者少年，多指男孩，多为年长者的使用。
2.1
We all know only
thecondition along with the correct way would go to the goal , oneself want to
dowithout a ask of one else .
[教师点评]
[语法检查] 请检查 a ask (Wrong article)
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[句子错误] 句中不同单句之间需要添加连词。
并不是任何标点符号，在任何情况下都可以用来连接两个并列句子。常用的能把两个句子连接起来，构词并列复合句的标点符号有分号和冒号。在没有连词的情况下，一般不能用逗号并列两个句子。点击查看。
[拼写错误] dowithout 拼写错误，可替换选项为：do
without, do-without, without
2.2
when individual and
interest are absent from a student , it might be a fail, which not only wastes
many resource but also ruins one's confidence.
[教师点评]
[句子错误] 请注意句首单词首字母大写
[搭配错误] 语法错误，be fail不规范，建议修改。
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[低频警示] absent from a student
在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 ruin...confidence
在教材中出现过 14 次
SeeAlso: destroy confidence108,break confidence34
2.3
" I don'twant to study "
just exist in the child's mind and teachers and parentsdon't know the truth ,
which is critical in making the whole plan .
[教师点评]
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 know...truth 在教材中出现过
1040 次
SeeAlso: acknowledge truth44,recognize truth34
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...plan 在教材中出现过
3156 次
SeeAlso: do
plan166,make design102,cause plan9
[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有“孩子”之意。
baby:
日常用词，一般指从刚出生的婴儿到满两岁的或非常小的孩子，常含钟爱意味。
child:
普通用词，含义广，无感情色彩。泛指从胎儿、婴儿到10岁左右的儿童。
infant:
书面用词，狭义指出生后到两岁的小孩，广义指7岁以下的孩子；法律上则指未到法定年龄。
youngster:
泛指任何年龄的儿童或者少年，多指男孩，多为年长者的使用。
[批改提示] know近义表达有cognize/
recognize/ realize/ foreknow
3.1
The more giving , fail the
interest and individual , the moreworse to happened.
[教师点评]
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
[拼写错误] moreworse 拼写错误，可替换选项为：more
worse, more-worse, morose
[学习提示] 易混词汇: give, accord, award,
confer，grant, endow, present, bestow 均含有“给予，赠给”之意。
give:
最普通用词，泛指将自己的东西给予他人，所给予的东西，物质或非物质的均可。
accord:
侧重所给予的是应得的或是恰当的，或是因某种原因而适于接受的。
award:
通常暗示所给予的东西是接受者应得的，而且给予者往往是具有裁判权力的。
confer: 通常指授予称号或学位等。
grant:
多指出于慷慨、怜悯或正义感而给予，并且通常是在被请求下给予。
endow:
指捐赠大量的钱作基金，也可指给予非物质的东西。
present:
指正式地给予或授予，通常伴有仪式进行。
bestow:
正式用词，指把某物作为礼物赠送于某人，也可作引申用。
3.2
living in a incorrect
situation concluding a wrong teacher anda short-sighted parent, is a crazy
education which drives child go to the edge.
[教师点评]
[语法检查] 请检查 a incorrect (Wrong
article)
[低频警示] incorrect...situation 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[低频警示] crazy...education 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[名词错误] 冠词缺失，drive child不规范，建议修改。
[动词错误] 语法错误，建议将drive sb do改为drive
sb to do。
3.3
It must be impossible to
reap profitwhen child go to the first wrong step.
[教师点评]
[词序错误] 请检查the first wrong
step，确认词序是否正确。
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[低频警示] reap...child 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[拼写错误] profitwhen 拼写错误，可替换选项为：profit
when, profit-when, profiting
[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有“孩子”之意。
baby:
日常用词，一般指从刚出生的婴儿到满两岁的或非常小的孩子，常含钟爱意味。
child:
普通用词，含义广，无感情色彩。泛指从胎儿、婴儿到10岁左右的儿童。
infant:
书面用词，狭义指出生后到两岁的小孩，广义指7岁以下的孩子；法律上则指未到法定年龄。
youngster:
泛指任何年龄的儿童或者少年，多指男孩，多为年长者的使用。
3.4
try to make sure that child
having a chance in personality as a free childcan fly without
consideration.
[教师点评]
[句子错误] 请注意句首单词首字母大写
[拼写错误] childcan 拼写错误，可替换选项为：child
can, child-can, childcare
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 make...child 在教材中出现过
210 次
SeeAlso: make
baby148,make
kid114,do
child110,cause child34,make
fry17,make youngster8
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 have...chance 在教材中出现过
42559 次
SeeAlso: take chance7247,accept chance36
[学习提示] 易混词汇: baby, child, infant,
youngster 均有“孩子”之意。
baby:
日常用词，一般指从刚出生的婴儿到满两岁的或非常小的孩子，常含钟爱意味。
child:
普通用词，含义广，无感情色彩。泛指从胎儿、婴儿到10岁左右的儿童。
infant:
书面用词，狭义指出生后到两岁的小孩，广义指7岁以下的孩子；法律上则指未到法定年龄。
youngster:
泛指任何年龄的儿童或者少年，多指男孩，多为年长者的使用。
3.5
I am firmly convinced that
under the change ofopinion , the parent would wiping the blind education
completely thoughchallenge should not underestimated , the achievement will
appear in the nearfuture.
[教师点评]
[动词错误] 建议把 would wiping 改成 would
wipe (Auxiliary Verb Agreement)
[句子错误] 本句语法不规范，请检查！
[低频警示] blind...education 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[低频警示] wipe...education 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[标点错误] 标点与其前面的单词之间 不应该有空格，请检查
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