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I go to Sha Lake with my classmates.We arrive there at nine o′clock.We ride horses,play soccer in the morning.Then,we have lunch.In the afternoon,we sing songs and play games together.And come back at haif past three.We are very happy!
真是自己写的！望采纳！
I go to Sha Lake with my classmates.We arrive there at nine o′clock.We ride horses,play soccer in the morning.Then,we have lunch.In the afternoon,we sing songs and play games together.And come back at haif past three.We are very happy!
真是自己写的！望采纳！
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第1个回答 2013-02-05
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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
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正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
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第2个回答 2013-02-05
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I go to Sha Lake with my classmates.We arrive there at nine o′clock.We ride horses,play soccer in the morning.Then,we have lunch.In the afternoon,we sing songs and play games together.And come back at haif past three.We are very happy!真是自己写的！望采纳！
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