英语作文 一次难忘的旅行

Question

以An Unforgettable Travel(一次难忘的旅行）为题目，写一篇80词左右的短文。要求写清楚难忘的原因，并需要介绍旅行的过程！

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Answer 1

An Unforgettable Travel
My families plan to visit the interesting place p of Shanghai.We are led to the Oriental Pearl TV Tower ,a famous tourist attraction,which is on every Shanghainese's lips.It is a magnificent building located in Pudong New Area,it is the tallest building,so it's very easy to see this building,even if you are several miles away it.As we get to the high floor of the Oriental Pearl TV Tower,we see the attractive viwswhich includes the Huangpu River through the window.At the moment,l suddenly moved by the builders put their soul and energy to this building and let it be a landmark of this city.
This is the trip l never forget.

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Answer 2

Unforgettable travel

Last winter, I and father and mother went to Virginia together the friend family crossed the Christmas day. We embark that morning, the weather was not very good, also cloudy was also cold, but was also having the light rain. We are driving the automobile continuously toward the north. In a while, on vehicle's rain water has formed the light ice. To the noon, the space started to snow, under Vietnam is bigger, the road surface is getting more and more slippery. Front the rain wash must not stop hits can see clearly the road. Afterward, in the window ice were getting more and more, the rain wash could also not help. We have often to stop the vehicle to come the ice to knock off the window, continues to start off again. To afternoon 45 o'clock, we have transferred the small mountain road by the highway, the snow have not stopped in next. We have lived south US's Atlanta, there the winter very little ices up and snows, therefore daddy is not familiar with on the ice drives. The vehicle starts specially slowly, daddy also appears very anxious. Although daddy especially careful, but in a curve's place beyond control, the automobile slides to other parallel traffic lane, because the following vehicle could not stop down has run upon our vehicle. We stop the vehicle to police and so on roadside. The day already completely was by now black. Police tell us, the front mountain road is more difficult start, therefore we discussed that looks for an inn to live first down. Had front the vehicle out of control experience, daddy vehicle has opened slowly. On the road all vehicles start look like the turtle to crawl. A mountain road piece of darkness, also cannot see the roadside the house, could find the inn to where? Without the means that can only continue to proceed to go slowly with trepidation. Past 10:00 pm, we arrived at the friend family finally. Our automobile besides the wheel, has wrapped a thick ice completely. Daddy said that later did not think again the snowing day drove travels. This is an unforgettable travel, but also hoped that later do not have the second time again.

Answer 3

I just came back from Guangxi province on July 20, 2007. I went there for work about a month. It is a real beautiful place. There are so many hills and clean rivers and kind people there. It is my first time that I went there where so many high and steep hills around. I had seen many colorful butterflies and heard sweet birdcall and breath fresh air, all of these could not be found in big cities. In there, most of local persons are very hot for our coming. They feasted us with local fish and chick and so on. All of foods are green and no fertilizer. So we still feel warm and happy though our task of work is heavy there. When chatting with local persons, I could feel their kindness and simple. Because of wicked traffic condition, many of them go out lesser, even few of them never go out. They are very curious for outer world. But they love their hometown very much and do not want to leave here. I was surprised that under the same sky we have so different life and thinking. But life is a kind of feeling, if you feel happy, then your life is ok for yourself.

The last days of living there, I sometime missed home and my lover and my friends. I was unaccustomed to the fewer people and so quiet life there. The same with them, after all,there is not my home.

I list some beautiful photos in below, I hope you can like them. I am glad to share happiness with you.

参考资料：http://blog.sina.com.cn/s/blog_4a6c56a701000919.html

Answer 4

An Unforgettable Travel
I have been to Xingjiang once. It’s so beautiful a place that once you get there, you will never forget the beguiling scenery.
Xingjiang is the biggest province in China, which ocuppies one sixths of China’s land. I, together with my dad and mom, visited many famous tourist attractions, got to many view spots and took so many photos which are treasury to me. I kept those photos with romantic memories not only as real things in living, but also deep in my heart.
That journey is ever so unforgetable. I also saw the troops saying there for protecting our country. And I’m of course proud of that.

Answer 5

When
I
was
a
primary
school
student,
my
family
and
I
took
a
trip
to
five
cities
which
were
in
the
south
of
China.
First,
we
came
to
Nanjing
by
plane.
That
was
the
first
time
I
had
taken
the
plane
and
it
took
us
an
hour
and
a
half
to
get
there.
We
arrived
in
Nanjing
in
the
morning.
At
11:30
we
went
to
a
restaurant
to
have
lunch.
The
food
tasted
delicious.
In
the
afternoon
we
went
to
“Zhongshanling”.
It
was
the
place
that
preserve
the
tomb
of
Mr.
Sugshan.
The
next
day,
we
came
to
Wuxi
and
then
Suzhou
where
we
visited
the
region
of
rivers
and
lakes
of
“周庄”.
It
was
a
beautiful
and
old
place.
The
house
there
were
along
the
river
and
the
women
always
washed
clothes
at
the
bank.The
fourth
day,
we
came
to
Hangzhou
where
We
visited
“The
West
Lake.
It
was
very
beautiful
and
the
water
was
clear
.
As
we
all
know,
Hangzhou
is
famous
for
silk
and
tea,
so
we
bought
some
beautiful
silk
and
famous
tea
of
“龙井”.The
last
place
that
we
visited
was
Shanghai.
It
was
one
of
the
biggest
city
is
China.
The
night
view
in
Shanghai
was
more
beautiful
than
Beijing.
We
visited
the
TV
tower
of
“东方明珠”.
It
was
the
third
tallest
tower
in
the
world.
Standing
in
the
tower
you
could
see
the
whole
city.
In
the
evening,
we
lived
in
a
hotel
with
25
floors.
I
was
very
excited
that
evening.
This
trip
took
us
seven
days
and
we
went
back
to
Beijing
by
plane.
The
plane
was
very
very
big.
There
were
three
engine
rooms.
I
felt
happy
and
I
would
never
forget
the
trip.