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Question

白沙

深渊中的白沙

究竟是什么样的激情

发现了它。在暗的深处

在一个哑巴平静的心灵里

发现了它

从此，它就开始翻滚

成为波浪的比喻

滚滚而来的、时间的比喻

创造了白色

然后，又创造了混沌的海

描绘了海岸的弓背

鱼群是后来者

人是后来者

我肯定不是最后一个

理解沙的人

希望译文能准确理解原作主题思想，意境表达不俗。谢谢！

Answer 1

白沙
White Sand

深渊中的白沙
the white sand in the deep sea
究竟是什么样的激情
found by what a passion
发现了它。在暗的深处
deep in the dark
在一个哑巴平静的心灵里
in the quiet heart of a deaf
发现了它
it is found
从此，它就开始翻滚
it rocks since then
成为波浪的比喻
as a comparison to the wave
滚滚而来的、时间的比喻
and to the rocking time
创造了白色
which created the white
然后，又创造了混沌的海
then the sea of chaos
描绘了海岸的弓背
and outlines the sea's bank arch
鱼群是后来者
the shoal is the subsequent
人是后来者
the people is the subsequent
我肯定不是最后一个
But I'm not the last one
理解沙的人
who understand the sand

Answer 2

The White Sand

the white sand in the gulf
what kind of enthusiasm does (does加强语气)
find it .In the deep of dark
in the dummy calm soul
find it (两个find it 排比)

therefore,it begins to roll
becomes the figure of waves
figure of time going behind (with going behind 译为接踵而至,滚滚而来)
it creates white
later,creates the muddleheaded sea
describes the archback of the coast

the shoals are afterwards
so are the people
yet I mustn't the last one (mustn't加强语气)
who understands the sand

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Answer 3

Baisha

Abyss of Baisha

What is the kind of passion

Found it. In the depths of dark

In a dumb and calm in the hearts of

It found

Since then, it started to tumble

A wave metaphor

Billowing from the time analogy

Created a white

Then, create a chaotic sea

Camponotus painted coast

Later, the fish

Later, people

I certainly will not be the last one

Understanding of sand

Answer 4

In Baisha abyss Baisha is actually what fervor has discovered it. had discovered in dark deep place in a mute's tranquil mind its henceforth, it started to tumble to become, time analogy which the wave analogy rolling came to create white then, also created chaos sea to describe seacoast back the school of fish is successor the person is successor I is definitely not last Understands the sand person