看我翻译的英语句子有无语法错误。

Question

东部华侨城（OCT）是娱乐和学习的完美结合，适合全班出游。
OCT,which is a better place to play for the whole class,is perfect combination of entertainment and study.

Answer 1

没有语法错误。但如果是我的话，我会这麽写：OCT ,a great place for the whole class to play ,combines entertainment and study perfectly .

Answer 2

语法还好，但语意稍微有些问题。

a better place to play=to play a better place=玩一个更好的地方？
还有，我理解你中文全句的重点应该在于“适合全班出游”，所以在翻译时你应该把这句作为主语。
OCT...... is perfect combination也不太合适，因为这意味着 OCT=combination，东部华侨城是地方，不是结合，按照中文直译不太符合逻辑。

建议改为：OCT, which perfectly combines both entertainment and learning, is a suitable destination for the class trip.

Answer 3

OCT,which is a perfect combination of entertainment and study, is a good place to play for the whole class to go.
满意请采纳哦~

Answer 4

正确翻译East OCT (OCT) is the perfect combination of entertainment and learning, for the whole class.
你翻译出来的是：10月,这是一个更好的地方来参加整个类,是娱乐和研究的完美结合。
建议去学下语法

Answer 5

个人觉得翻译没有大问题，只是将which is去掉可能更好点 做同位语