专八改错，请问下面句子中括号里面，哪个是错的，怎么改，谢谢

Question

1.(so great) is our passion (for) doing things for ourselves,that we (are becoming) increasingly less independent (than) specialized labor.
2.（some of the plants） in his store require very (little care),but this one needs (much more sunlight) than (the other one).
3.The man,(of whom the ) red car is( parked) in front (of our house),(is) a prominent physician in this town.
4Mike did (as he said) when he (forecast) that he would (knock into) Joe (to win ) the world's heavy-weight championship.
5.The history of painting (is a ) fascinating (chain of events) that (probably) began with the very first picture (ever been made).
6.Men who lived thousands of years ago,(long before) alphabets (were devised),(they) used pictures to record events and to (communicate) ideas.
7.Benjamin was an (eighteenth century ) American artist who (influenced) British painters just (so much) as he (did other)American artists.
8.Although he was (very ambitious) and (wanted eventually) (to run ) the business,(but he didn't) really works as well as he could.
9.People (respected ) George Washington because he was (a honest man), and he (turned out ) to be (one of our greatest) military leaders.
10.David (tends to )feel (useless and unwant) in a society that gives (so much prestige) to those who (compete well).

Answer 1

我没说不确定的，都是可以保证正确的。

1.than 改为 on, 还有，那个是dependent吧，要不句子意思不对啊.
现在我们自己动手做事的热情很高，结果对于专业工人的依赖越来越少了。

2.the other one改为 other ones.
植物不止两棵。

3.of whom改为whose。
要表示所属的话，要用which,因为定于从句中，the red car和the man是所属关系，如果非要用of whom的话，应该是the red car of whom.

4.【这题我不是很确定】，as he said改为as he had said。
【果然这题我错了】应该是：(knock into 偶然碰到)--(knock out 击败 )

5.ever been made去掉been.
(过去分词做定语，不是被动)

6.they去掉。
如果有they的话，前后两句就都是独立的句子，两个完整的句子之间不能用逗号。

7.so much改为 as much.
as much as表程度间的同级比较。so much as只用于否定句。

8.,(but he didn't) --,(he didn't)

前面有although了，不能再用but.
另外，你这题后面的works应该是work

9. (a honest man), -- (an honest man),
honest的发音，以元音开头。

10.(useless and unwant)--(useless and unwanted )
unwanted是形容词。不被需要的，不受欢迎的。

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追问

额，是呢，你好细心啊，第一题那个打错了，是dependent,第八题的work也是我打字打错了，另外第二题能不能改成the others或者the other ones? 第五题和第七题能不能帮我翻译下？，还有第九题，我知道应该是改成an,不过respected貌似也不对，能不能指教下为什么啊？O(∩_∩)O谢谢哈

追答

第二题，要么other ones,要么,the others
第五题，这个翻译有点意译，你理解不了就告诉我，我给你解释。
油画历史是由一连串的迷人事件组成，其源头大概可以上溯到最早的图画。
第九题：respected是对的。
因为他可能说的是过去的人们，可能那时George Washington还在任。

追问

嗯嗯，明白了，第七题能不能也帮我翻一下？后面半句句型有点不懂

追答

Benjamin West是18世纪美国艺术家，他对英国画家的影响同对美国艺术家的影响一样大。

后面那个did相当于前面的influenced
这样懂么？

Answer 2

不确定是否正确，虽然专八过了，但是好多东西都忘记了
10. unwant-unwanted
09,respected-respect
08.but 去掉
07.so much -that much
06. they 去掉
05. that ever been made
04.knock into- knock out
03.of whom the- whose
02.Some of plants
01.for -of
这个。。。呵呵。。。有一半对就好了。。

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谢谢你的回答啊，不过上面那位回答的仔细些，(*^__^*) 嘻嘻……