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Question

Snow has fallen since last year. None of people want to go out. They prefer to stay at home rather than go out.

Answer 1

1. fall属于不能延续的”瞬间动词“，后面的时间状语又是since last year, 是延续性的。这两者不搭配，不能同时出现在一个句子里。
2. 我觉得这句话的中文意思也有问题，难道是”去年起就下雪了“？还是”去年起就没下雪“？
3. 如果改成这样，不知是否符合你的原意？It snowed heavily yesterday. Few people want to go out. They prefer to stay at home rather than go out.
4. 用few people 比用none of people似乎更客观一些。此外，为避免重复使用词组go out, 还可以写成：Most people prefer to stay at home rather than go out.

追问

我的第一句话的原意是：自从去年下雪以来
你明白我的意思了吗

追答

答案修改：
Ever since it snowed last year, few people want to go out. They prefer to stay at home.
Or: Ever since it snowed last year, most people prefer to stay at home rather than go out.

Answer 2

你可以说 it has been snowing since last year.

Answer 3

由于none of 可用单数亦可用复数所以want真确