英语作文 my hobby 大家帮忙批改一下错误

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my hobby
ever one have personal hobby,sb enjoy watching tv,sb enjoy like playing basketball or computer games.
perhaps,my hobby is collecting stamps,when I was seven years old,I think collect stamps is very interesting and I collect more than,I will like it more than
I think old stamps was very rich,collect stamps can make me relax and run out of boring times
however,I like play computer,I think you like it to.
will,this is my hobby,what's your hobby?

Answer 1

你只说改错，所以我尽量保留你原来的意思 (希望我没有会错意! XD)

Everyone has a personal hobby; some people enjoy watching TV, others enjoy things like playing basketball or computer games.
My hoppy is, perhaps, collecting stamps. When I was seven years old I thought collecting stamps was very interesting, and the more I collected, the more I liked it. (<<我想你的意思是 我收集的越多 就越喜欢)
I think old stamps are very precious and collecting them can help me relax and pass boring times. (pass boring times--这句不是很确定, 不然你就说pass time就好)

However, I also like playing computer games and I guess you like it too.
Well, that is my hobby. What's yours?

Answer 2

My hobby.
Everyone has their personal hobbies, e.g. enjoy watching TV, e,g enjoy like playing basketball or computer games.
Perhaps, my hobby is collecting stamps, since I was seven years old, I thought collect stamps is very interesting and I collect more of them I'll like it more.
I think old stamps are very exorbitant, collect stamp can make me relax and get rid of my depressions, however, I also like to play computer, I guess you'll like it too.
Well, that's all my hobbies, now, what's your hobbies?
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Answer 3

Everyone has a hobby, e.g., watching TV, playing basketball, playing computer games, etc.
My hobby is collecting stamps. I started to collect stamps when I was seven-year-old. I thought collecting stamps was so fascinating and I have been collecting them ever since.
Collecting stamps has been an enriching experience for me; it enables me to relax and it rids me of my boredom.
However, collecting stamps is not the only thing I do in my spare time. I play computer games sometimes just like kids my own age.
Enough about my hobby, Now back to you: what is your hobby?

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Answer 4

my hobby
everone has hobbies,sb enjoy watching tv ，sb enjoy like playing basketball or computer games.
My hobby is collecting stamps. when I was seven years old,I thought collecting stamps is very interesting. Since then,I started collecting them and enjoyed this more and more.
I think old stamps was very precious,collecting stamps can make me relax and kill time.
Also,I like playing computer,I think you may like it too.
well,this is my hobby,what's your hobby?