小学三年级英语作文《我》求批改

Question

ME

My name is ye qi, I’m nine. I have tall body, two big eyes, two small ears and a small mouth. I like bananas, yellow, monkey. I am a happy boy.

I have a big bedroom. bedroom have a telephone It grey, two desk It a brown a yellow, and two chair It black.

I have big family. My grandfather is funny and heavy. He has old face. He love apple. My grandmother is kindly old lady. She has big body. She love grape. My father is tall and strong. He has a big month. He loves pineapple. My mother is pretty. She has thin body. She likes peach.

My teacher is tall and thin. She has thin body. She To teach we English. My friend is cute and naughty. He has two small eyes and two big ears. He likes mango.

The pet is a handsome cat is me. It has big body and a long tail. It likes fish and mice.

I love family.

小学三年级的作文，请帮忙批改。

Answer 1

I have tall body最好改成I'm tall.然后再是I have……。 bananas, yellow, monkey的话三个放在一起没什么联系，从语法角度，是没错，但读起来不是很习惯。最好改成 I like bananas and monkey .my favourite color is yellow.
bedroom have a telephone It grey这句话存在问题，可以改为i have a telephone in the bedroom .the colour is Grey
你先看看这样，行不。不知道有些词汇运用是否超过三年级水平。我再帮你改改

Answer 2

Myself （我自己）

My name is Chen Xiaoye(陈小叶，参考一下，姓和名分开，姓和名首字母要大写）. I’m nine. I am tall（我很高）.I have two big eyes, two small ears and a small mouth. I like bananas . I am a happy boy.

I have a big bedroom.There is a grey telephone,two brown desks and two yellow chairs in my bedroom. （某地有某物用there be 句型:某人有某物用have/has)

I have a big family. My grandfather is funny and heavy. He has an old face. He loves apple. My grandmother is an old kindly lady(长的形容词放短的后面）. She has a big body. She loves grape. My father is tall and strong. He has a big month. He loves pineapple. My mother is pretty. She has a thin body. She likes peach.

My teacher is tall and thin. She has a thin body. She teaches us English. My friend is cute and naughty. He has two small eyes and two big ears. He likes mango.

The pet is a handsome cat . It has a big body and a long tail. It likes fish and mice.

I love my family.

希望能帮到您！

Answer 3

I have tall body
虽然没语法错误 但是还有点怪怪的 改成 I am tall.

I like bananas, yellow, monkey.

monkey 可数名词加 s

bedroom have a telephone It grey,

it grey 主谓宾 缺少一个谓语 is

two desk It a brown a yellow,

desk后加s It a brown a yellow有点怪怪的 改成
This is brown and that is yellow.

and two chair It black.

改成 and two chairs It is black.

He love apple.

改成He loves apples.

还有很多 名词没有加s 第三人称也要加s
自己再看看吧
话说 LZ的作文好干瘪瘪的 毕竟你才三年级
多写点作文 多看点作文 多问问老师
好了 祝你学习进步哦
(看我码了这么多字 就采纳我的吧 谢谢咯)

Answer 4

MY

My name is ye qi, I’m nine years old. I have tall body, two big eyes, two small ears ,a small nose and a small mouth. I like bananas, yellow, monkey. I am a happy boy.

I have a big bedroom. bedroom have a telephone ,It is grey, two desk It is brown and yellow, and two chair It is black.

I have big family. My grandfather is funny and heavy. He has old face. He love apple. My grandmother is kindly old lady. She has big body. She love grape. My father is tall and strong. He has a big month. He loves pineapple. My mother is pretty. She has thin body. She likes peach.

My teacher is tall and thin. She has thin body. She to teach we English. My friends is cute and naughty. He has two small eyes and two big ears. He likes mango.

The pet is a handsome cat is my. It has big body and a long tail. It likes fish and mice.

I love family.

Answer 5

My name is Ye Qi, I’m nine. I am tall and I have two big eyes, two small ears and a small mouth. I like bananas, yellow and monkeys. I am a happy boy.

I have a big bedroom. Bedroom has a grey telephone.There are two desks and one is brown and another is yellow.My bedroom also has two black chairs.

I have a big family. My grandfather is funny and heavy. He has old face. He loves apples. My grandmother is kindly old lady. She has a big body. She loves grapes. My father is tall and strong. He has a big month. He loves pineapples. My mother is pretty and thin.She likes peaches.

My teacher is tall and thin. She has a thin body. She teaches us English. My friend is cute and naughty. He has two small eyes and two big ears. He likes mangoes.

I keep a handsome cat for my pet. It has a big body and a long tail. It likes fish and mice.

I love family.