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There are many animals with clever and strong in the vast ocean.Dophin is one of them.Although it isn't the strongest animals,but the brain of dolphin is the best except human being.They can grow up 1.2 to 4.2 metres long and weight is 23 to 225 kilogram.Mainly with fish ,squid,shrimp and crabs to eat.It has a maximum speed of 40 kilometres an hour.
Dolphin is very kind of people and it is one of our best friends.It usually save people from drowing.They can bring us amazing and happy.So please value our friend----dolphin!
There are many clever and strong animals in the vast ocean.The dophin is one of them.Although they aren't the strongest animals,but the brain of a dolphin is the best after human beings.They can grow up 1.2 to 4.2 metres long and weight 23 to 225 kilogram.Dolphins mainly eat fish,squid,shrimp and crabs.They can reach a maximum speed of 40 kilometres per hour.
Dolphins are very kind to people and it is one of our best friends.It usually saves people from drowing.They can bring us amaze and happiness.So please value our friend----dolphin!
写得很好，只是语法错误多。
There are many animals in the vast ocean which is clever and strong. Dophin is one of them. it isn't the strongest animal in the world, but the brain of dolphin is the best except brain of human being. They can grow up to length of 1.2 to 4.2 metres and weight of 23 to 225 kilogram. Mainly they eat fish, squid, shrimp and crabs. They can reach a maximum speed of 40 kilometres per hour. Dolphin is very nice to people and it is one of our best friends and they often save people from drowing. They can bring us amaze and happiness. So please value our friend----dolphin
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听高手帮我检查一下英语作文~!
but the brain of a dolphin is the best after human beings.They can grow up 1.2 to 4.2 metres long and weight 23 to 225 kilogram.Dolphins mainly eat fish,
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