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假如你有两个好朋友。一个叫陈薇，是一个性格开朗，喜欢运动的孩子。另一个叫林红，比较文静，喜欢看书 ……
请你写一篇不少于60字的短文，介绍这两位朋友在外貌和性格方面的共同点以及不同点等。（注意形容词、副词原级和比较级的运用）

Answer 1

I have two good friends. They are Chen Wei and Lin Hong. Chen Wei is 12, She is as old as Liu Hong. She is a girl of cheerful humour.She likes sports very much. Liu Hong has a very calm temperament. She likes reading books. They have the different hobbies. Chenwei has two big eyes, but Lin Hong's eyes are bigger. They are all very lovely. Chen Wei does better in PE than Liu Hong. She runs faster than Liu Hong and she jumps higer too. Liu Hong is better at Chinese than Chen Wei, She often helps me with my Chinese. We are all good friends.

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能不能注意注意形容词、副词原级和比较级的运用

追答

对，使用了形容词，副词原级和比较级。
如：
She is as old as Liu Hong
Chenwei has two big eyes, but Lin Hong's eyes are bigger.
Chen Wei does better in PE than Liu Hong.
She runs faster than Liu Hong and she jumps higer too.
Liu Hong is better at Chinese than Chen Wei

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请问加在哪

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这些都在文章中啊。
我只是选出来给你看的，你仔细读读作文就知道了。

Answer 2

I have two best friends. One of them is called Chen Wei and the other is called Lin Hong.
Chen Wei is quite outgoing while Lin Hong is kind of quite and timid. Chen Wei likes playing sports in her free time while Lin Hong is fond of reading books.
Although they are different from each other in character, they are both helpful and academic. I hope they can be my best friends forever.

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注意形容词、副词原级和比较级的运用）

追答

把第一句改成， Of all my friends, I like two guys better than anyone else.
第二段加一句： Chen Wei is taller than Lin Hong while Lin Hong is a little more overweight than Chen Wei.
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