这是一篇介绍河北省的两分钟ppt英语演讲稿，希望英语高手们可以帮忙修改一下其中的语法错误，感激不尽。

Question

Hello!Everyone.Let me introduce my hometown to you.(翻页)I came from Hebei province.Hebei province surrounds Beijing,besides Shandong province and Shandong province.The Provincial capital of Hebei province is Shijiazhuang.And I’m living there. (翻页)Then let’s see a poem phrase. It described two kinds of the beauties in this world . This word is the brief name of Hebei.And This picture is present of the beautiful view in the first half sentence of this poem phrase. (翻页)Look at this picture!This is the picture of the provincial flower of Hebei . It’s a kind of Philadelphus. (翻页)Then let me introduce many places of historic interest in Hebei to you. (翻页)There is a picture of Zhaozhou Bridge.Zhaozhou bridge is located in Zhaoxian county.This bridge was build in Sui Dynasty when between now about one thousand and five hundred years ago that It’s the first stone arch bridge in the world. (翻页)And this is the picture of Chengde Imperial Summer Resort .It’s the place where Qing emperors worked and relaxed in summer three hundred years ago.But today it’s a good place for people who likes touring. (翻页)Then look at this picture.It’s the picture of The west mausoleum of the Qing Emperor .There are many Qing Emperors burried in there(翻页).And there are also many places of scenic beauty in Hebei. (翻页)For example,Bashang grassland(翻页),Mulan hunting ground (翻页),and JIULONG Mountain natural scenic spot.we can see all kinds of beauties in different seasons and different places there. (翻页)Finally ,there are many famous historic people in Hebei.For example, the general named Zhaoyun in Three Kingdoms period. (翻页)The writter of Dream of the red chamber Caoxueqin (翻页).The editor of imperial collection of four Jixiaolan。(翻页)They are all well-known in Chinese history.That’s all.Thank you for watching.（完）

Answer 1

1:beside是介词不加S，加了后意思就不对了，先把S去掉。可以改为：....Beijing and it is adjacent
to shandong province.
2：第三句中的province可以不要了，太累赘.and i am living there 可以改为 where i am living紧接在石家庄后面。
3phrase去掉
4described 改为describes更好。虽然过i去式不错但是现在时的话更能和你将要念的诗相照应。
5beauty不加S
6ihistoric改为places os interest.
7between now about 去掉，直接加时间就可以了。that 做同位语位置不对可以直接去掉。
8all kinds of beauties 中的美丽一词也不要加S；
9 writter写错了。这句话你可以说：the other famous is ao xueqin who gave the monumental woks--Dream of the red chamber Caoxueqin to china,to world.
10四库全书直接翻译成拼音还比较地道，这样就算是外国人在听你说他也知道是怎么回事。Si ku quan shu 。整句可以说成：The final famous i am going to give you is JIXIAOLAN,he is the editor of sikuquanshu.你的原文连动词都没有。

Answer 2

Hello!Everyone.Let me introduce my hometown to you.(翻页)I came from Hebei province.Hebei province surrounds Beijing,besides Shandong province and Shanxi province.The Provincial capital of Hebei province is Shijiazhuang,where I live. (翻页)Then let’s see a poem phrase describing two kinds of the beauties in this world . This word is the brief name of Hebei.And This picture is present of the beautiful view in the first half sentence of this poem phrase. (翻页)Look at this picture!This is the picture of the provincial flower of Hebei . It’s a kind of Philadelphus. (翻页)Then let me show some historic places in Hebei to you. (翻页)There is a picture of Zhaozhou Bridge.Zhaozhou bridge is located in Zhaoxian county.This bridge was built in Sui Dynasty one thousand and five hundred years ago.It’s the first stone arch bridge in the world. (翻页)And this is the picture of Chengde Imperial Summer Resort .It’s the place where Qing emperors worked and relaxed in summer three hundred years ago.Today it’s a good place for touring. (翻页)Then look at this picture.It’s the picture of The west mausoleum of the Qing Emperor .There are many Qing Emperors burried there(翻页).And there are also many places of scenic beauty in Hebei. (翻页)For example,Bashang grassland(翻页),Mulan hunting ground (翻页),and JIULONG Mountain natural scenic spot.we can see all kinds of beauties in different seasons and different places there. (翻页)Finally ,there are many famous historic people in Hebei.For example, the general named Zhaoyun in Three Kingdoms period. (翻页)Caoxueqin,the writter of Dream of the red chamber (翻页).Jixiaolan,the editor of imperial collection of four。(翻页)They are all well-known in Chinese history.That’s all.Thank you for watching.（完）

Answer 3

你好!我Everyone.Let介绍我的家乡翻页你。(我来自河北省。河北省,除了山东省围绕北京和山东省。河北省的省会是石家庄。我住在那里。(翻页)那么让我们看到一个诗词。它描述了两种不同的“美女在这个世界上。这个词是短暂的名字河北。这幅画的礼物和美丽的风景在第一个半句这首诗的短语。(翻页)看看这张照片!这是图像省花河北。它是一种Philadelphus。(翻页)那么,让我介绍许多名胜古迹河北。(翻页)有一幅赵州桥的。赵州桥位于赵县。这座桥是建立在隋朝时之间现在大约一千零五年前的第一块石头拱桥在世界。(翻页)这是一幅图画承德避暑胜地,帝国的地方工作和放松清皇帝夏季三百年前。但是今天它是一个好地方,他喜欢旅游。(翻页)然后看这张图画。这是西方的图片清朝皇帝陵墓还有许多清皇帝秃鹫在那里(翻页)。也有许多名胜景区在河北。(翻页)例如,坝上草原(翻页),木兰猎场(翻页)、九龙山自然风景区spot.we可以看到各种各样的美女在不同季节和不同的地方。(翻页)