关于job hunting 的，请帮我看一下语法之类有没有错误，并告诉我该怎么改，谢谢~！

Question

A: Hello, please have a seat. I’m sally, what can I do for you?

B: Hi, I am May. I graduated from international business management. But I don’t know what job is suitable to me.

A: Do you have any experience?

B: I have work in foreign companies as a trainee translator.

A: How do you think about the job?

B: I think it's very challenging for me, But I didn't feel very difficult, I’m willing to accept it, so when I was work as a trainee translator, I always feel happy and energy.

A: So, what do you thinking about your Professional knowledge?

B: I think is so so, I have no idea how to manage the business so I always feel uneasy about it. But if I have a chance, I will try my best to learn it. Because I am desire to be a Professional management staff in the future

A: Don’t worry, I will help you out. What about being a translator first?

B: Really? Why?

A: I really appreciate your enthusiasm in translation work, so I think that if you can being a translator first, your enthusiasm will drive you study hard on management. Then in the near future, you will become an excellent management personnel if you exert yourself.

B: Thank you! I will think about it.

Answer 1

这位朋友，说句实在话，有点中国式的翻译，确实有很多地方需要修改的

A: Hello, please have a seat. I’m sally, what can I do for you?
建议：人名的首字母要大写，即把sally改写为Sally
B: Hi, I am May. I graduated from international business management. But I don’t know what job is suitable to me.
建议：毕业于应该是某个学校而不是专业，所以要把international business management改为你的学校的名字。还有一点建议，你要是去找工作最好要明确你的工作目标，不要说不知道什么工作适合我
A: Do you have any experience?

B: I have work in foreign companies as a trainee translator.
这句话有点含糊，have work 应该是现在完成时，所以应该把work改成worked.
如果你要表示“有”，也要用过去式才对呀，所以建议该：i have worked in...
A: How do you think about the job?

B: I think it's very challenging for me, But I didn't feel very difficult, I’m willing to accept it, so when I was work as a trainee translator, I always feel happy and energy
这句话有点乱：建议改为though it is very challenging for me, i still trust myself to occupy it very well. Besides whenever i worked as a trainee translator i feel so happy and energitive.

A: So, what do you thinking about your Professional knowledge?

B: I think is so so, I have no idea how to manage the business so I always feel uneasy about it. But if I have a chance, I will try my best to learn it. Because I am desire to be a Professional management staff in the future
朋友记住：你这是在找工作，对自己要有自信，写总是否定自己，连你自己对自己都没信心，这个公司怎么要你呀，对吗？
要是我就直接说：I am confident in my ability to do everything well. Although i maybe meet some difficulties, i think i can overcome any difficulty. At the same time, i will learn from everyone here.
A: Don’t worry, I will help you out. What about being a translator first?

B: Really? Why?
(这里为什么要问really? why?)不太明白你的意思
建议：Thank you very much. i will overcome the difficulties more quickly with your help.

A: I really appreciate your enthusiasm in translation work, so I think that if you can being a translator first, your enthusiasm will drive you study hard on management. Then in the near future, you will become an excellent management personnel if you exert yourself.
(being改为be) (drive you study改为drive you to study)
B: Thank you! I will think about it.
(别这么大牌，我会考虑一下) 建议：I expect our cooperation

Answer 2

A: Hello， please have a seat. I’m （名字要大写）**Sally**. （这里分成两个句子）What can I do for you?

B: Hi, I am May. I ***have a degree in***(I graduated from 一般是说从某个大学毕业的） international business management. But I don’t know what **jobs are** suitable ***for*** me.

A: Do you have any ***(建议加个prior)*** experience?

B: I have ****worked**** in ***several*** foreign companies as a trainee translator.

A: ***What did*** you think **of** the job?

B: (不要加 I think，没必要)***It was*** very challenging for me, **but** I didn't feel ***it was too*** difficult (说very difficult 和前面那段冲突）. (英语注意不要把太多东西放在一个句子里，一句话说一件事）I ***was*** willing to accept it (接受什么？）, so when I ***was working*** as a trainee translator, I always ***felt*** happy and energetic (energy是名词，不是形容词）.

A: So, what do you ***think*** about your （不要大写）professional knowledge?

B: I think is ***so-so***. （分两句） I have no idea how to manage the business so I always feel uneasy about it (你要说清it指的是什么）. But if I ***had*** a chance, I ***would*** try my best to learn it（英文里的it不是万能的！！）. Because I ***wish***(desire不是这么用的） to be a （不要大写）professional ***manager***(staff是一个小组） in the future.

A: Don’t worry, I will help you out. ***How*** about ***becoming*** a translator first?

B: Really? Why?

A: I really appreciate your enthusiasm ***for*** translation work, ***and*** I think that if you can ***be*** a (good?) translator first, your enthusiasm will drive you study hard on management. Then,* in the near future, you **can** become an excellent ***manager***(personel是一群人） if you ***apply*** yourself.

B: Thank you! I will think about it. (建议把will think about改称will consider)

Answer 3

I have work in foreign companies as a trainee translator 变成 i had worked in foreign companies as a trainee translator before
How do you think about the job?改为what do you think about the job
I think it's very challenging for me, But I didn't feel very difficult, I’m willing to accept it, so when I was work as a trainee translator, I always feel happy and energy.改成 I think it's very challenging for me，but i don't feel how difficult it is,i'm willig to accept,so when i worked as a trainee translator,i always feel happy and full of energy.
I really appreciate your enthusiasm in translation work, so I think that if you can being a translator first, your enthusiasm will drive you study hard on management. Then in the near future, you will become an excellent management personnel if you exert yourself.
I really appreciate your enthusiasm in translation work, so I think that if you can be a translator first, your enthusiasm will drive you to study hard on management. Then, in the near future, you will became an excellent management person if you exert yourself.
so so最好不要用，感觉很没礼貌可以改成i团伙i 团伙i think it is ok或i don't think it is ok for me

Answer 4

international business management首字母大写 But I don’t know what job is suitable to me but换成and to改为for any experience experience改为experiences I have work n foreign companies as a trainee translator have work 改为worked