英语作文my penpal 。好心人帮帮忙!!!!!!!!!!!!!

如题所述

自己写,我们帮你修改。
1介绍你的笔友姓名等基本信息
2你们如何认识的
3你们的通信过程,笔聊或者网聊的话题,爱好
4你认为他这个人怎么样追问

I have a new penpel. Her name is XiaoYu. She likes listening to music singing diving and collecting stamps. l like XiaoYu .Because she is active and smart.l like XiaoYu.Do you like XiaoYu?What is your penpal?

追答

写的还可以,语句通顺。内容还不够丰富,所以字数少了点。你可以扩写爱好,比如听音乐和唱歌,小雨喜欢听什么音乐唱什么歌?她喜欢的是不是你也很喜欢,也就是你们有相同的爱好可以彼此分享?再扩写她的聪明开朗,举些例子比如她会讲笑话tell funny jokes,你感到和她聊天非常愉快之类的。。扩写就是举例子,加上你的感受。添加这些细节后就可以誊写到本子上了

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第1个回答  2011-11-03
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