求大神帮我写一篇英语作文，分数中等的就可以，急需。

Question

求大神帮我写一篇英语作文，分数中等的就可以，急需。一篇英语作文，谢谢。

Answer 1

I visited Beijing during my winter holiday.I visited many places of interest and cultural heritage sites such as the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace.I saw many foreigners in Beijing and I had a pleasant conversation with a lady from America.She told me that she was attracted by Beijing through the Olympic Games.I enjoyed my trip to Beijing!

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⊙∀⊙！好像不对啊。