第1个回答 2012-05-13
1.范文
I’m Wang Shan, a girl of sixteen, presently attending Beijing Yangguang Middle School. I like music, especially classical music. I’m also interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. Through my hobbies, I’ve made many friends. In fact, I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them. Believing we all need help from each other, I appreciate friends’ help, and I’m willing to help anyone in need.
I love life, Mother Nature as well as peace. I hate any form of violence.
I would like to join the Peace & Friendship Summer Camp since it would be a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about their cultures.
2.范文
Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time-93 minutes-into their homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.
As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class. This way, they may be healthier and more energetic.
3.范文
Dear Editor,
Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.
Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. Besides, they believe that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.
However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well–known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
June 3, 2005
4.范文
Dear Jeff,
I’m Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Chasses in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
题一
阅读下列材料,按要求作文。
孟子曰:“君子有三乐……父母俱存,兄弟无故(灾患),一乐也;仰不愧于天,俯不怍(惭愧)于人,二乐也;得天下英才而教育之,三乐也。”(《孟子·尽心下》)
孟子认为君子有三乐,其实这也应当成为我们今天崇尚的人生之乐。请选择三乐中一乐作文。
要求:1、写议论文或记叙文;2、题目自拟;3、不少于700字;4、不得抄袭、不得套作。
[题目简析]
题目要求选择孟子提出的“三乐”中一乐作文,这就为作文确定了三个备选话题。“一乐”的话题范围是家庭亲情,“二乐”的话题范围是事业抱负,“三乐”的话题范围是教育成才。对于考生,三个方面都并不陌生,同学们身心健康成长,无时不在感知和享受这“人生三乐”吧?“三乐”中间再任选其一,“三乐”还都可以转化为许多相关话题,谈“乐”之因,“乐”之果,“乐”之事,“乐”之情,“乐”之有,“乐”之无,“乐”之无中生有,“乐”之有中变无。“三乐”中任何一“乐”都不会是空洞的,都因具体内容充实而享其“乐”的。这个作文题目,和“假如记忆可以移植”“诚信”“心灵的选择”“感情亲疏与对事物的认知”“忘记与铭记”“明星代言”“兽首回归”“我说90后”“有句话常挂在嘴边”……全都贯通。这就为考生写熟悉的生活,表达真情实感提供了充分自由的空间。
或问:如果我对“三乐”都没有体会怎么办?退一步,例如,我自小父母双亡,在应试教育的环境中,我没有以天下为己任的胸怀抱负,也感受不到老师“得天下英才而教育之”的豪迈与欣慰,怎么办?题目说得好:“这(三乐)也应当成为我们今天崇尚的人生之乐。”应该成为,却缺失了,我们不应该为自己、为同学、为社会,表达真切的感受、沉重的反思和强烈的渴盼吗?唯如此才“仰不愧于天,俯不怍于人”,才不辜负亲情和师情。
例文①
礼义廉耻,国之四维
有位化学博士写了篇论文,研究怎么快速检测牛奶中三聚氰胺含量,投到国外杂志。审稿的编辑答复:这有什么用?
是啊,在审稿的编辑看来,牛奶和三聚氰胺,八竿子打不着,风牛马不相及啊!
这正应了那句俗话:“好人根本不知道坏人有多坏。”谁能想到奸商竟然如此丧尽天良呢?
三聚氰胺事情刚刚暴露的时候,记得曾有奸商辩解:“法无禁止即可为,国家哪部法律禁止了往牛奶里添加三聚氰胺?”
于是不少民众一齐炮轰国家药品食品监督管理局没有预见:“你们干嘛不明文禁止?”
国家食品药品监督管理局满脸委屈:“我们还没有明文禁止往牛奶里加屎加尿呢?难道你也想加吗?有害物质千万种,我们禁止得尽吗?”
曾几何时,“不管白猫黑猫,抓到老鼠就是好猫”还是促进经济繁荣的澎湃动力。八一大桥桥头的白猫黑猫,甚至一度成为我们江西解放思想的标志,成为我们南昌的骄傲。谁承想,该口号如今却成了不少奸商“不择手段”制售假冒伪劣谋取黑心利润的借口,成了不少官员“不择手段”贪污腐化捞钱捞权的借口,成了不少学者“不择手段”抄袭作弊谋取职称名望的借口。
香港媒体《东方日报》甚至因此发出“中华民族到了最缺德时候”的呐喊,在网上引起强烈共鸣。该文认为,以名利为衡量一事一物的取舍标准的世俗之风,击穿了社会伦理操守的底线,渐渐地将这个社会推向邪路。
于是,不少妇孺皆知的常识一再进入各种红头文件:禁止官员贪污公款;禁止企业暴力抗税;禁止把上访者当成精神病;禁止醉酒驾车;禁止城管打人;禁止妇产科医生猥亵妇女;禁止教师强奸学生。
生活在这样的时代,真是人人自危,个个焦虑:到哪里去寻找真正安全的食物?到哪里去寻找可以信赖的朋友?到哪里去寻找公平公正的法院?到哪里去寻找可以仰仗的官员?就连县委书记都在叫屈:“我们是最最弱势的群体!”普通人能从哪里得到内心的快乐?在我看来,大国崛起,不仅需要经济繁荣,更离不开伦理道德。
礼义廉耻,国之四维。
请每一个希望自己幸福、希望社会和谐、希望中华复兴的炎黄子孙,都牢记礼义廉耻,都遵从孔孟教导:仰不愧于天,俯不怍于人,堂堂正正,光明磊落。如是,则民幸福可盼,灵魂安乐可期。
例文②
迷失在iPad2时代的快乐
iPad2是什么?它是最新款苹果手机。然而,iPad2绝不仅是一款手机。
在郑州某高一男生的眼里,它还象征着最大的快乐。为了享受iPad2带来的快乐,他不惜以两万元的价格,卖掉了自己的肾。
为iPad2疯狂的远不止这个男孩。日前,在天涯社区,竟然有16岁的女生声称愿意出卖自己的初夜,索要的价格,竟然就是一部iPad2。
不得不佩服苹果公司的首席执行官乔布斯的能耐。他不仅把濒临倒闭的苹果公司带出泥潭,而且将苹果的产品上升到了流行文化的高度,令无数时尚男女为之痴迷,为之疯癫,并为此趋之若鹜。似乎谁拥有iPad2,谁赶上了对生活品质、流行趋向、先进技术、乃至文化追求的大潮,谁就有真正享受到了生活的快乐。
问题是:当iPad3、iPad4乃至iPadN的时候,时尚男女又该出卖什么来换取呢?新潮电子产品不断升级换代,有到头的那一天吗?
在潮流裹挟下的时尚男女竟如此迷失,实在叫人心痛。
战国时期的孟子,对快乐的定义是:“父母俱存,兄弟无故。”《增广贤文》也说:“黄金非为贵,平安值钱多。”足可见千百年来,人们一直认为,全家人和睦安康,平安生活,就是一个家庭的福祉。至于钱财物质官阶地位等身外之物,真的与快乐没有太大关联。
请大家想想看:汲汲于金钱利禄,有啥意思?家有良田千亩,每天只吃三餐;纵有高楼万栋,睡觉只需三尺。汲汲于功名地位,有啥意思?《红楼梦》早就说绝了:“古今将相今何在?荒冢一堆草没了。”汲汲于声色犬马,那就更没意思啦,把自己退化成动物了!
但现在麻烦的是,有许多人总是因为贪婪,想得到更多的东西,结果把已有的快乐幸福都弄丢了。郑州男生卖肾后,身体健康可有保障?天涯女生若果真卖身,会不会因此堕入深渊?
人这一辈子可短暂呢,套用小沈阳的话说:“眼睛一闭,一睁,一天就过去了;眼睛一闭,不睁,这一辈子就这么过去了。”
哪里有后悔药可买?一失足成千古恨,再回首已是百年身。
但愿大家都能远离纷扰,挡住诱惑,好好经营家庭幸福。
题二
阅读下面的材料,按照要求作文。
古人云:“以铜为镜,可以正衣冠;以古为镜,可以知兴替;以人为镜,可以明得失。”“镜”是认识自我和世界的另一双眼睛。今天,更多种类的镜丰富了我们感知的层次和色彩:望远镜将我们的视线引向远方,显微镜撩开微观世界的神秘面纱,反光镜让我们瞻前仍可顾后,哈哈镜变幻出多样的自己,三棱镜在我们面前架起一道美丽的彩虹。这些镜为我们打开了多维的空间,使我们的视野更加开阔,思想更加深邃,心灵更加明澈。
请从望远镜、显微镜、反光镜、哈哈镜、三棱镜中至少选择两种镜,结合自己的感悟,写一篇文章。
要求:①自选角度,自拟题目。②除诗歌外,文体不限。③不少于800字。④不得套作,不得抄袭。
[题目简析]
题目要求“从望远镜、显微镜、反光镜、哈哈镜、三棱镜中至少选择两种镜,结合自己的感悟,写一篇文章”,这就确定了作文的话题范围。考生可以单独写两种、三种、四种或五种镜,也可以在两种至五种镜之间进行交叉比较,选材范围灵活自由。
材料中说:“这些镜为我们打开了多维的空间,使我们的视野更加开阔,思想更加深邃,心灵更加明澈”,这就为考生谈“感悟”做出了多方面的启示。
正面谈,很好。因为题目对五种镜的功用做出了清晰的说明,据题正向发挥,相对容易一些。反面想,也可以。“望远镜将我们的视线引向远方”,却在近处留下盲点;“显微镜撩开微观世界的神秘面纱”,于是也就少了朦胧的诗意;“反光镜让我们瞻前仍可顾后”,眼神却可能因此分散;“哈哈镜变幻出多样的自己”,幽默中也扭曲了本来面目;“三棱镜在我们面前架起一道美丽的彩虹”,但只是虚幻的彩虹而已。这些也不失为“使我们的视野更加开阔,思想更加深邃,心灵更加明澈”的表现。据题反向发挥,相对难一些。
五种镜,其实也是五种人,五种待人处事之道,五种人生观和世界观。正向发挥,想出类拔萃,关键是要写好;反向发挥,想标新立异,关键是要写通。不知道有没有考生写一篇说明类的科学小品,那也会妙趣横生,关键是要熟悉:有丰富的细节,有足够的感悟。
例文①
不要只剩一副老花镜
请拿起反光镜,看看过去——我们要知道,我们是谁。
请拿起望远镜,看看未来——我们要知道,我们要做什么。
在我们的建设中,曾有多少历史遗存被推土机的巨手掀翻,在画了一个大圈的“拆”字下饮泣。在它们的遗体上,又无聊地盖起了多少不中不洋不伦不类的“现代建筑”?我们的一些建设者,只带着一副老花镜,能看清的,只是眼前的一点点。
如果有一天,我们的反光镜被摔得粉碎,我们将不知自己是何许人也,我们是谁,我们从哪里来。悲夫!世界上最大的族群竟成了最孤单、最不知何去何从的民族。
近日,南京地铁因保护梧桐而改线;北京梁思成故居因市民的愤慨而免于被拆的厄运。这很令人欣慰——我们在日益认识到“反光镜”的重要。全球化的年代里,我们要先知道自己是谁,才有颜面、有勇气面对世界啊!管仲在儒家道德观念里,算是一个不忠之臣,而孔子依然赞扬他。为什么?他保留了华夏文明,使我们免于同化于蛮夷。现在不是讲华夷大防的年代了,但民族文化的反光镜是任一时代都需要的。一棵大树生长繁茂的前提是它要有根!
用反光镜认识我们从哪里来,然后,举起望远镜,看一看未来的路。
伦敦给世界庄重古朴的伦敦印象,巴黎给世界明丽照眼的巴黎印象,纽约给世界新锐现代的纽约印象。试问有哪一座城市是因模仿他人而成为世界名城的呢?我们要用望远镜看一看未来,看一看远方,然后,走自己的路!
东南沿海有些小镇,改革开放初期,拆掉古屋,建港式别墅,后拆掉,改为英式,再拆掉,建西班牙风情小镇。世上有一个民族这样乐于毁掉自己的东西然后乐此不疲地模仿别人吗?
要扛好望远镜,看一看未来。只有做好自己,才是走向未来的唯一道路。模仿,只是初级的学习阶段,继承基础上的创新,才是我们要做的事情。
经历了十年浩劫,我们的文化遗存已成了空架子,整个民族对文化是迷茫的。然后我们就措手不及地面对了全球化。这样,我们的反光镜与望远镜都太易碎,也太沉重了。但无论如何也要用好这两面镜,道理很简单——我们要做自己,在无法回避的全球化浪潮中劈波斩浪。摘下老花镜,回顾历史,而后高瞻远瞩!
例文②
五镜争功
镜国要评选优秀,其中一个环节是候选镜述职。
望远镜挺着长长的腰身,气宇轩昂地点头行礼,字正腔圆道:“本镜一贯忠于职守,从未有过半点儿的懈怠,而且如果不是今天的场合,我绝不会谈起自己的功劳。因为我的尽责,我们镜国才开始睁大眼睛看世界,才了解到了外面的世界很精彩,才知道浩瀚的宇宙空间是那么浩渺无垠。尽管很辛苦,但我毫无怨言。要论优秀,舍我其谁?”
“哼!说的比唱的好。”三棱镜一脸鄙夷,“你咋不说说窥探隐私并大肆传谣的事呢?前两天,你……”
“大家好!”反光镜鼓着光滑的肚子,边走边打招呼,“我没啥业绩,因为我有一个缺点,只能往后看,所以有镜说我没有远大理想,也有镜说我有轻度心理疾病。但是,如果众位都像我这样,时常回头看,反省反省自己,就能避免以后犯错误,没准儿可能成为一面圣镜哪!谢谢大家,请支持我!”
“支持你,想得美!”显微镜把那只小眼睛瞪得圆圆的,“那次,你故意在身上弄个小泥点,让望远镜先生以为自己长了麻子,差点儿去做整形手术。望远镜老哥,你忘了?”
“至今想起仍一日九回肠呀。”望远镜往显微镜身边凑了凑,“该你了。我支持你。”
显微镜的底盘有些低,好不容易挪到了话筒前:“很多镜不喜欢我,说我就爱把小问题放大成大问题。我冤啊,有些事若不是我及时发现就危险了,比如那个什么杆菌之类的。再者,你要是把优点放在我眼皮底下,会有意想不到的效果。就说在座的各位吧,望远镜目光高远,反光镜警钟长鸣,三棱镜呢,是美好生活的装扮者……”
“谢谢!谢谢!”三棱镜跑上去,一把夺过话筒,“做生活的美容师,让大家快乐,是我最大的幸福。赤橙黄绿青蓝紫,大家想想,能让天上的彩虹进入到我们生活的各个角落,谁有这样的本事?倒数五个数,五——四——三……”
“哈哈哈……有趣有趣,真是有趣!”哈哈镜拖着他那里出外进的身子,一步三晃,“要说扮美生活啊,我居功至伟。高兴不高兴,完全看心情。不管你有什么烦心事,往我跟前一站,脸长了,像驴;腿短了,像蛤蟆;腰弯了,像蛇。好笑不?哈哈,哈哈,哈哈,你连笑三声,就神马都是浮云了。心情舒畅,过日子就有劲头儿了,看啥啥顺眼了。”
“呸!玩儿去!”四口唾沫同时飞到哈哈镜脸上。
第2个回答 2012-05-14
1.范文
I’m Wang Shan, a girl of sixteen, presently attending Beijing Yangguang Middle School. I like music, especially classical music. I’m also interested in photography because it allows me to record the beautiful moments in my life. Through my hobbies, I’ve made many friends. In fact, I like meeting new people and enjoy talking with them. Believing we all need help from each other, I appreciate friends’ help, and I’m willing to help anyone in need.
I love life, Mother Nature as well as peace. I hate any form of violence.
I would like to join the Peace & Friendship Summer Camp since it would be a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about their cultures.
2.范文
Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time-93 minutes-into their homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework.
As is shown on Chart 2, only 10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class. This way, they may be healthier and more energetic.
3.范文
Dear Editor,
Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.
Some of my classmates are in favor of the move. They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams. Besides, they believe that once moved, animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs.
However, other students are against the idea, saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906, has a history of 100 years, and is well–known at home and abroad. So it should remain where it is. What’s more, moving may cause the death of some animals. To move or not, this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
June 3, 2005
4.范文
Dear Jeff,
I’m Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.
While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Chasses in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.
If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.
Best wishes,
Li Hua