有英语好的人吗，帮我看下这篇英语作文都错哪了？

Question

I hear from you will go back mother land.Terfore we want to open a farewell party for you. We hope that you can take in this activity.
In the past of two years you has made progress.And every subject is very well .I am very proud of you. It is high time to say thank you. you helped me and my classmates to learn english. What is more. We can know the different America culture and chinese culture. In the end of time we hope that we can have fun.
Finally the party will be hold at the sun club 302 room.Besides you can take 332 bus to get there derictly.looking forword to you coming. 谢谢了！

Answer 1

主要问题是语法错误，语句不够简洁。
I hear from you will go back mother land.-------改I hear that you will go back to mother land。
Terfore we want to open a farewell party for you------改 therefore，we want to hold a farewell party for you.
We hope that you can take in this activity.-------改 We hope that you can take part in it activity
In the past of two years you has made progress.And every subject is very well .I am very proud of you---------改 you made progress in the past two years, each subject is very well, i am very proud of you.
We can know the different America culture and chinese culture-------改 we can konw the difference beween America culture and Chinese culture
In the end of time we hope that we can have fun.-------改 in the end, hope we can enjoy ourselves
looking forword to you coming-------改 looking forward to your coming

Answer 2

I hear( from you) that you will go back to your motherland.Therefore we have planned to hold a farewell party for you. We hope that you can join in this activity.
In the past of two years you have made rapid progress.And you have done every subject well .I am very proud of you. It is high time to say thank you. you helped me and my classmates to learn english. What is more. We can know the differentce between America culture and chinese culture. we hope that we can have fun during the limited time we are spending together .
Do remember that the party will be held at Room302 in the sun club .Besides you can take 332 bus to get there derictly.looking forword to your coming.
希望对你有所帮助，祝学习开心！

追问

大的错误是不是很多啊，那方面错误多？谢谢了！

追答

答案被人窃用 是非分不清楚

Answer 3

I hear you will go back mother land.Therefore,we want to open a farewell party for you. We hope that you can take part in this activity.
In the past of two years you have made great progress,and all the subjects are good.I am very proud of you. Besides,It is high time to say thanks. You helped my classmates and me to learn English well.As a result,we can know the difference between American culture and Chinese culture.
So I looking forword to your coming sincerely.The party will be hold at the sun club 302 room,and you can take 332 bus to get there derictly.

Answer 4

把terfore改为so，把“derricty。looking”改为“I”

Answer 5

I hear from you will go back mother land.Terfore we want to open a farewell party for you. We hope that you can take in this activity.
In the past of two years you has made progress.And every subject is very well .I am very proud of you. It is high time to say thank you. you helped me and my classmates to learn english. What is more. We can know the different America culture and chinese culture. In the end of time we hope that we can have fun.
Finally the party will be hold at the sun club 302 room.Besides you can take 332 bus to get there derictly.looking forword to you coming.

Answer 6

I hear from you will go back mother land.Terfore we want to open a farewell party for you. We hope that you can take in this activity.
In the past of two years you has made progress.And every subject is very well .I am very proud of you. It is high time to say thank you. you helped me and my classmates to learn english. What is more. We can know the different America culture and chinese culture. In the end of time we hope that we can have fun.
Finally the party will be hold at the sun club 302 room.Besides you can take 332 bus to get there derictly.looking forword to you coming.全错