求高中英语改错

Question

It is important to know how to do with the rubbish in cities.Rubbish must be treated
properly.Thus,it was cause a lot of problems.It may pollute the air and water.When
people breathe the polluted air or drunk the polluted water ,we may get ill.Our city
has began to pay attention to the problem.As far as I know ,some rubbish is sorted
and sent to different factroy .Rubbish such as old newspapers and glass are
recycled. Some harmful rubbish is sent to a certain place and buried.Waste air is
treated before it poured into rivers .To protect from the environment ,the government has passed laws to provent people throwing rubbish everywhere.
We should do our best to take good care of the environment and fignt against
pollution.

Answer 1

It is important to know how to manage (用管理处置比较好） the rubbish in the (要加顶冠词） cities.

Rubbish must be treated properly.Otherwise (取代thus, 指否则）,it would(委婉语气， 表达有这个可能性) cause a lot of problems.

It may pollute the air and water. When people breathe in (加in在breahe后指吸入) the polluted air or drink （用一般时态因为前面的breathe也是一般时态来维持语态一致） the polluted water ,they (取代we, 用人称一致， 因为前面你提及到people他们) may get sick (取代ill, 因为用ill时， 前面要用be).

Our city has begun (begun是过去分词， 而began是过去式）paying (取代to pay, 强调现在进行， 而不是将要进行像to pay) attention to the problem.

As far as I know ,some rubbish is sorted and sent to different factories (用复数， 因为不同的工厂是多于一个的).

Rubbish, (用逗号） such as old newspapers and glass，（用逗号把这句子分开做从句来修饰前面的名词） are recycled.

Some harmful rubbish is sent to （却掉a, 因为 place后加复数）certain places to be （去掉and, 用to be指被什么的 ) buried.

Waste water （waste air是气体， 怎能可以倒在水里呢？） is treated before being (前有介词，后加动词ing) poured into the（加顶冠词）rivers .

To protect （去掉from, 指保护， 若加from就是从某某里保护， 这里是要保护环境吧？）the environment ,the government has passed several (加several表示几条）laws to prevent people from (prevent from是阻止某某做某事）throwing rubbish everywhere.

We should do our best to take good care of the environment and fignt against
pollution.

Answer 2

It is important to know how to do（deal) with the rubbish in cities.Rubbish must be treated
properly.Thus,it was cause(caused was 要去掉的）) a lot of problems.It may pollute the air and water.When
people breathe the polluted air or drunk(drank) the polluted water ,we may get ill.Our city
has began(begun) to pay attention to the problem.As far as I know ,some rubbish is sorted
and sent to different factroy（factories) .Rubbish such as old newspapers and glass(glasses) are
recycled. Some harmful rubbish is sent to a certain place and buried.Waste air is(had)
treated before it poured into rivers .To protect from(去掉from) the environment ,the government has passed laws to provent people throwing rubbish everywhere.
We should do our best to take good care of the environment and fignt against
pollution.