求翻译高手帮忙 考研复试英文自我介绍

Question

简要说明情况：
尊敬的各位专家、教授：
上午好！我的名字是某某，26岁，于2008年毕业于某某学校，在校期间学习刻苦、积极参加社会活动。
毕业后就职于某某单位，作为一名临床护士，慎独、敬业是我工作的座右铭。关心、体贴每一位患者，促进舒适、减轻病人的痛苦是我的职责。一直坚持将理论与实践充分结合，工作期间，担任科室的带教和教学，多次参加医院的大项活动，并获得多项奖励。
此次参加研究生入学考试的目的，一方面，想在护理科研方面有所突破，随着医学模式的转变和护理学科的发展，临床护理工作需要将实践进一步的深入，帮助更多的患者促进健康。另一方面，希望有机会向一直在促进护理事业发展的专家和教授学习和交流，丰富自己的知识体系和开阔个人眼界。
感谢各位教授、专家的聆听！

Answer 1

以下是翻译过来的。。你参考哈。。艾。。你没有加分的艾。算了。。

Dear every expert, professor:
Good morning! My name is xx, 26 years old, in 2008 graduated from the school, during the period of school study hard, take an active part in social activities.
After the graduation inauguration in so-and-so unit, as a clinical nurse, self-supervision, dedication is my work motto. Concerned about, and considerate every patient, promote the comfortable, alleviate the suffering of patients is my duty. Has been insisting will fully integrate theory with practice, work period as the department and teaching and teaching, participated in the hospital sports activities, and access to a number of awards.
The to the purpose of the postgraduate entrance exam, on the one hand, want to have a breakthrough in nursing research, with the transformation of medical model and the development of nursing science, clinical nursing practice will need to further thorough, the help more patients to promote health. On the other hand, hope to have the chance to have been nursing career development experts and professors study and exchange, enrich their knowledge system and open personal horizon.
Thank you for professors, experts to listen!

追问

这翻译的也太牵强了吧

追答

好吧。。。我的错。。不该给你翻。。

追问

呵呵 谢谢