大家帮帮忙 看看我的这篇关于奥运会的英语演讲稿有没有什么问题 有问题帮忙修改一下

In the summer
holiday
We welcome the Olympic
Games in London
I am sure that you
will think of the 2008 Beijing Olympic games.
In that year,that
day
The whole world in
looking forward
In the opening
ceremony of the Olympic
The Olympic rings
time to shine,
How grand, how
inspire people,
Competition in
many Olympic athletes did not live up to all of their expectations, they let China
once again set in the world,
Their spirit is
worth our learning!
The end of the
game, the whole world is for those Olympic athletes hail!
In the closing
ceremony, we bid farewell to be reluctant to part of the Beijing Olympic Games,
but did not stop the movement, in 2012, the world ushered in the London Olympic games! The
Olympic flame will never die! Let us cheer for the Olympic Games

In the summer holiday
We are all welcoming the Olympic Games in London
I am sure that you must think of the 2008 Beijing Olympic games.
In the day of that year, the whole world is looking forwardin the opening
ceremony of the Beijing Olympic.
The Olympic rings time to shine,how many people are hit.In the Competition, everyone try them best and most athletes did not live up to all of their expectations, they let China
once again set in the world,
Their spirit is worth our learning!
In the end of the game, the whole world is hail for those Olympic athletes !
In the closing ceremony, we bid farewell to be reluctant to part of the Beijing Olympic Games,
but did not stop the movement, in 2012, the world ushered in the London Olympic games! The
Olympic flame will never die! Let us cheer for the Olympic Games!你这篇是直接翻译的吧,我尽力了,可能有些不对。
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