英语短文改错，速度！（共十处，有缺词、多余、错词，没有语序错误，要原因说明）

Question

Sometimes,friendships actually formed over homework. I made some of my best college friend after I started working a tutor for Student Support Services.I got to know other tutors and several of the students which came to be tutored.I was also be able to get help with my Spanish homework from the Spanish tutor,who was a native of Bolivia. She introduced me to other international students or she even came to her birthday party last summer and met my family.Even though we tend to making friends with people who are most like us, sometimes the best friendships can be with people who are the most differently.

Answer 1

Sometimes,friendships actually formed over homework. I made some of my best college friend(friends) after I started working (as) a tutor for Student Support Services.I got to know other tutors and several of the students which(who) came to be tutored.I was also be (删去be)able to get help with my Spanish homework from the （改为a）Spanish tutor,who was a native of Bolivia. She introduced me to (删去to)other international students or (改为and)she even came to her（my） birthday party last summer and met my family.Even though we tend to making(make) friends with people who are most like us, sometimes the best friendships can be with people who are the most differently(different).
分析如下：

1 friend(friends) 很多中的一些或某一个，后面要用复数
2 working (as) 作为家教老师 要用as
3 which(who) 先行词是人，故用who
4 be (删去be） be able to 前面有was 重复
5 the （改为a）一个西班牙语家教老师 而不是特指那个老师
6 to (删去to) introduce sb sth 固定搭配
7 or (改为and) 逻辑并列关系
8 her（my）根据句意是参加我的生日聚会
9 making(make) tend to 后面要用动词原形
10 differently(different).为了与前面对称be动词后要用形容词

追问

我觉得6不对，不需要改！

追答

Sometimes,friendships (were) actually formed over homework. I made some of my best college friend(friends) after I started working (as) a tutor for Student Support Services.I got to know other tutors and several of the students which(who) came to be tutored.I was also be (删去be)able to get help with my Spanish homework from the （改为a）Spanish tutor,who was a native of Bolivia. She introduced me to (删去to)other international students or (改为and)she even came to her（my） birthday party last summer and met my family.Even though we tend to making(make) friends with people who are most like us, sometimes the best friendships can be with people who are the most differently(different).
分析如下：
1 友谊被形成 应该用被动语态，故后面加were
2 friend(friends) 很多中的一些或某一个，后面要用复数
3 working (as) 作为家教老师 要用as
4 which(who) 先行词是人，故用who
5 be (删去be） be able to 前面有was 重复
6 the （改为a）一个西班牙语家教老师 而不是特指那个老师
7 or (改为and) 逻辑并列关系
8 her（my）根据句意是参加我的生日聚会
9 making(make) tend to 后面要用动词原形
10 differently(different).为了与前面对称be动词后要用形容词

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Answer 2

更正及其原因在括号处注明，保证准确率！

Sometimes, friendships actually (formed改成form：句子描述事实，用一般现在时) over homework. I made some of my best college (friend改成friends：some of...后面肯定加的如果是可数名词，则必定为复数) after I started working (加入as：work as... 担任...工作) a tutor for Student Support Services. I got to know other tutors and several of the students (which改成who：代指students不能用which) came to be tutored. I was also (去掉be：前面已经有了was) able to get help with my Spanish homework from (the改成a：句意为泛指，非特指) Spanish tutor, who was a native of Bolivia. She introduced me to other international students (or改成and：句意为承接，非选择) she even came to (her改成my：上下文句意可知) birthday party last summer and met my family. Even though we tend to (making改成make：tend to do sth倾向于做某事) friends with people who are most like us, sometimes the best friendships can be with people who are the most (differently改成different：系动词are后面用形容词做表语).来自：求助得到的回答

Answer 3

1.college friends朋友是复数的,不可能就一个哟
2.as a tutor作为职业,需要介词as
3.which------who.前一个指哪一个,而who当引导词,是指这些前来的学生们
4.get with------get for为作业得到了帮助
5.who---which非限定性名词从句,引导词是which
6.or----and并列,不是选择
7.her----my她甚至做到了什么.....
8.even去掉
9.making----make原形
10.most----more比较像我们自己的,在像不像的问题上,比较范围,不太容易出现最的情况哟