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我看得出来是不是用翻译软体翻的喔 ( 禁止使用翻译软体)

希望高手可以把我以下的句子翻通顺一点的英文 尽量简单的英文

以下

这本小说里面 有叙述到很多的问题 例如 毒品问题 还有家人之间的关系
还有 遗失单纯(纯真) , 克服障碍 等等的问题

首先是毒品问题 在我们的生活中 我们可以知道 父亲通常是作为自己的儿女榜样的人
不论是父亲做了什麼 我们也会跟著学 因为觉得父亲做的都是对的行为

但是在小说中 baby的父亲jules 是个吸菸又吸毒的人
因为这样的父亲 影响到baby的价值观 (观念) 她虽然并不喜欢做这些事情
可是为了吸引她父亲的注意力 於是她尝试了吸菸 後来更是因为为了放松自己 忘记烦恼 而尝试吸毒
这是多麼的可悲阿 因为这样的父亲 导致自己儿女身体和内心的毁坏 真是太令人难过了

另外 我想探讨的是她们父女之间的关系 他们之间的关系 根本就像陌生人一样
明明是亲生父女 却连陌生人也不如 这真是太可怕了
而且我发现baby的父亲jules 竟然对她 使用言语暴力 有什麼甚至对她拳打脚踢 这是多麼可怕的父亲阿
不疼她就算了 还打电话叫警察 把她送去社会局 (类似少年感化院的地方) 我从来没有看过一位父亲
做过这样夸张的事 我真的是为baby感到彻底的难过 如果是我的话 我想我可能宁愿选择逃跑或自杀
也不要有这样的父亲 但是我知道 这是不能选择的命运 如果可以选择的话 我相信她也不会选择这样的父亲

还有因为这样的父亲 导致baby完全失去她的童年和单纯 别的小孩在她这个年纪 都是快快乐乐的上学 读书 和朋友玩耍等等的
但她却不是 她是自己孤孤单单一个人 没有真正的朋友 她吸菸和吸毒 还有被迫去做prostitude 赚钱 等等的 她没有属於孩子们该有的单纯
她做的事情 都是平常小孩子们根本没办法去做的事情

我真的很心疼 baby的遭遇 如果可以的话 就像我另一篇所写的 真希望作者可以还给她应该要有的童年和单纯 给baby一个真正疼她和爱她的人

Answer 1

In this novel, many topics are mentioned such as drug addition, relationship between family members, the loss of innocence and overcoming obstacles etc…

The first one talking about is drugs. In our lives, a father is always regarded as a model for children, no matter what the father does, children will imitate, as they think those all are right behaviors.

Yet, Jules, Baby’s father, was a man addicted to drugs and cigarettes in this novel. With a father like that, Baby’s values were affected. Although she did not like doing those things, so as to attract her father’s attention, she tried to smoke and afterward she smoked to get relaxed, to forget the troubles then she tried drugs.

How sad it is! A father like Jules ruined his daughter both physically and mentally. It is surely a sorrow.

Moreover, I want to focus more on the relationship between Jules and Baby. They keep distance and are unconcerned about each other, like strangers, or even worse than strangers, while they have the closest relationship in the world, a father and a daughter in fact. It is so terrible.

Moreover, Jules treated Baby with verbal violence and beat her violently. What a horrible father he is.

Jules called to police to send her to protectory (like reform school). I have never met a father who did such exaggerative behaviors to his children. I am really sorry for Baby. If I were her, I would rather flee away or commit suicide than had a father like Jules. Anyway, I know this is fate what we cannot choose. If it is selectable, I believe that she will not choose a father like that.

Because of her father, Baby lost her childhood and innocence totally. Other children were going to school, playing games happily at her age. But she did not, she was lonely, she had no friends, she smoked and took drugs, she was forced to be a prostitute for money etc… She did not have the innocence what a kid should have. What she has done was incapable of doing for other children.

I really feel miserable for what Baby faced to. If possible, as what I mentioned in another article, I wish the author would give Baby a innocent childhood what she deserved and someone really love her and care about her.