你好，我有一篇email需要翻译，能帮忙吗

Question

尊敬的李老师：
您好！很感谢您在百忙之中抽空阅读我们的邮件。
我们的团队准备参加“第十三届挑战杯科技创新大赛”，希望您可以作为我们的指导老师。我们研究的方向是：预防及治疗人类肥胖。总所周知，您对着方面有很高的建树，所以我们很想在您的指导下，让我们对这个课题的热爱找到方向。
简单介绍下我们的团队。我们的团队一共有五人，两名来自动植物检疫（动物方向），两名来自药物制剂，一名动医本硕，其中专业第一两名。虽然我们的团队有四名是大一的，只有一名大二。但是我们认为：年级不是局限所在，最可怕的是没有思想，没有勇气，没有干劲，没有严谨求实的态度。
恳请老师考虑一下，也许单凭这短短几句话根本不足以让您了解我们团队的思想，并且我们也深知，您肩上的任务很重，平时很繁忙，但请你不要立刻拒绝，希望能给我们一个面对面交流的机会，然后再做决定。
最后，再一次感谢您的阅读，我们期待您的回复。

Answer 1

尊敬的李老师：
您好！很感谢您在百忙之中抽空阅读我们的邮件。
我们的团队准备参加“第十三届挑战杯科技创新大赛”，希望您可以作为我们的指导老师。我们研究的方向是：预防及治疗人类肥胖。总所周知，您对着方面有很高的建树，所以我们很想在您的指导下，让我们对这个课题的热爱找到方向。
Dear Master Li,
Thank you so much for taking time to read this mail.
Our team is going to participate in the contest for the 13th Science and Technology Innovation Challenge Cup and we hope you can be our guidance counselor. Our research is on “The prevention and therapy of human obesity”. As you are the renowned expert with great achievement in this field, we wish that you can guide us to find the right direction for this hot topic.

简单介绍下我们的团队。我们的团队一共有五人，两名来自动植物检疫（动物方向），两名来自药物制剂，一名动医本硕，其中专业第一两名。虽然我们的团队有四名是大一的，只有一名大二。但是我们认为：年级不是局限所在，最可怕的是没有思想，没有勇气，没有干劲，没有严谨求实的态度。
Please allow me to briefly introduce our team of five members: two are from animal and plant quarantine, another two are from pharmaceutical preparation, and one is from under and graduate course student in animal science; among them two persons scored top in their specialized subjects. Despite the fact that four of us are freshmen and only one is sophomore, we feel that grade level is not the hindrance; the most dreadful is the lack of ideas, courage, enthusiasm and without a serious and pragmatic attitude.

恳请老师考虑一下，也许单凭这短短几句话根本不足以让您了解我们团队的思想，并且我们也深知，您肩上的任务很重，平时很繁忙，但请你不要立刻拒绝，希望能给我们一个面对面交流的机会，然后再做决定。
最后，再一次感谢您的阅读，我们期待您的回复。
We earnestly beg you to give kind consideration to our request. Perhaps you can’t understand our team with only just these few words; we also realize your busy schedule with all your heavy tasks, but please do not reject us immediately. We sincerely hope that you would give us a chance for an interview and then make your decision.
Finally, we‘d like to thank you again for your time and anxiously look forward to receiving your reply.

【英语牛人团】

Answer 2

我勒个去，我刚才把二楼和三楼给的译文浏览了一下，我确信你们是用机器翻译的，完全是在践踏英语语法。

二楼一上来的称呼就有问题,哪儿有respect of这种说法?明明是respectful或者respectable/honorable.另外How do you do这种句子是口语化的第一次见面打招呼的用于,这里给对方写信用词应该用书面语的严肃语体.第一段的you have had a very high, so we are to your guidance这俩句子前面半句缺宾语，后面半句根本没有这种搭配方式
三楼的so we want to you under the guidance跟二楼简直是如出一辙。后面几段问题就更多了，而且我发现二楼三楼有一个共同点，都是用英语写句子不用主语，比如恳请老师考虑一下这一句吧，这一句明显省略了主语“我”，翻译成英语应该补上，但二楼和三楼竟然不约而同地都不写主语，真是匪夷所思。其他的错误更多了，要是一一评论再写一个小时都不够。

直接给楼主我的翻译吧：
Respectful Pro. Li:
How are you?Thank you very much for taking time to read our mail in the midst of pressing affairs.

Our team is preparing to participate the "the 13 th challenge cup contest for science and technology innovation",so we hope that we can have you as our guide teacher.The direction of our research is : the prevention and treatment of human obesity.As is widely known, you have made successful achievements in this area.For this reason,we sincerely wish to seek your guidance,which is going to help us find a right direction for the subject we love.

Let me give a brief introduction of our team. Our team consists of five members,two of them majoring in animal and plant quarantine,two majoring in pharmaceutical preparations,and one in veterinary medicine. Two out of our five members rank the first place in their majors.Despite the fact that four members in our team are freshmen and one member is a sop,we strongly hold that grade should not become a barrier to us and that what really matters is our idea,courage,vigor,and a matter-of-fact attitude towards our work.

We sincerely beg you to take our request into consideration.The few words above may not surfice to help you know enough about the ideas of our team. We also know that you are busy dealing with your own arduous acdemic tasks. But please do not decline our request at once. We will appreciate you if you can give us a chance for a face-to-face talk and then make your final decision.

At last,we once again thank you for reading this e-mail.We are looking forward to your reply.

Answer 3

Dear Lee teacher:

Hello.Thank you very much for taking the time to read our mail.

Our team is ready to participate in "the thirteenth Challenge Cup technology innovation contest", I hope you can be our teacher.Our research direction is: prevention and treatment of human obesity.As is known to all, you to have high achievement, so we want to you under the guidance, let us on the subject of love find a way.

A brief introduction of our team.Our team a total of five people, two from the animal and Plant Quarantine (animal direction), two from the pharmaceutical preparations, a move the medicine the Shuo, including professional first two.Although our team has four is big, have a big two.But we think: grade not limitations, the most terrible is no thought, no courage, no energy, no rigorous and realistic attitude.

Ask the teacher to consider, perhaps only this just a few words to let you know our team thought, and we also know that, your shoulders the task is heavy, usually very busy, but please don't immediately refused, the hope can give us a chance for face-to-face communication, and then make a decision.

Finally, once again thank you for reading, we look forward to your reply.

Answer 4

Respect of Mr Li:
How do you do! Very thank you in spite of being very busy toglance reading our E-mail.
Our team prepare to participate in "the 13 th the challenge cup science and technology innovation contest", hope you can as our guide teacher. We research direction is: prevention and treatment for obesity in humans. The well-known 1, you have had a very high, so we are to your guidance, let us on the subject of love find direction.
Simple introduced our team. Our team a five people, two from animal and plant quarantine (animal direction), two from the drug agents, a move the following medical, including professional the first two. Although we as a team of four is a freshman, only a sophomore year. But we think: grade is not limited place, the most terrible is there is no thought, no guts, no energy, no rigorous attitude.
Will the teacher to think about it, perhaps with this in just a single words is inadequate to let you know our team thought, and we also know that your shoulders of task is very heavy, usually very busy, but please don't immediately decline, the hope can give us a chance to meet face-to-face, and then make a decision.
Finally, thank you again for reading, we are looking forward to your reply.

Answer 5

看不见 怎么帮 好长 好长 好长 DEAR MISS LEE 一下省略 1000字

追问

我不是补充了问题了吗？

追答

太长了 我那个 肚子有点不舒服，