急求大神帮我看看我写的英语句子有没有问题？？和中文的意思对上了没有？谢谢！🙏

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急求大神帮我看看我写的英语句子有没有问题？？和中文的意思对上了没有？谢谢！🙏不好意思我今天才看到邮件，我已经完成了录音，会在明天拿到录音碟子，我可以先将录音用邮箱发给你和老师，并且同时寄出录音碟子和公证文件吗？
Sorry for you ,which I see your email today .I have already finished video,and I will get the recording plate in tomorrow.Can I send you a mail with the recording and at the same time send the video plate and notarized documents?

Answer 1

Sorry that I didn't see your email till today. I finished the recording and I'll get the tape tomorrow. Is it okay that I send you and the teacher the recording by email first and post the tape and the notarised documents together?

Answer 2

tomorrow 前面不用加in
还有把 at the same time放到句末

Answer 3

I'm sorry I just saw your email today. I've finished the recording and I'll get the recording disc tomorrow. Can I first send the recording to you and the teacher through email, and then mail the disc and notarized documents together?