求一段英文自我介绍。（50分）（拒绝翻译机）

Question

明天面试要用，最好符合一下小学水平，不要太难的单词和句子。内容如下：

各位老师，你们好！我先自我介绍一下。我的名字叫XXX，英文名叫Bella，是

个女孩，今年12岁了，来自XX。我喜欢中国和韩国的文化，也会说一点韩语。

我的爱好是唱歌、跳舞、玩电脑和韩语，而短跑是我的强项。在学校我曾经担

任过体育委员、纪律委员和组长，和同学的关系也非常融洽。在家里，我和家

人的关系也非常好，只是偶尔会闹些小矛盾，有时候也会说些小笑话逗大家开

心。我有一个非常幸福、快乐的家庭，有爱我和我爱的爸爸妈妈们，还有非常

关心我的同学朋友和老师们。我的自我介绍完毕，谢谢老师！

（麻烦英语高手翻译一下，如果有些句子必要的话也可以自行添加，但要注上

说明！谢谢！）

Answer 1

Good morning, teachers. Here is my self-introduction.I am XXX and my english name is Bella. I am a twelve-year-old girl comes from XX. I love cultures of China and Korea, also i can speak a little Korean. My hobbies are singing, dancing, playing computer games（玩电脑游戏，如果想说「上网」的话，可以说「surfing the Internet」) and speaking Korean. Besides（而且/另外的意思), I am good at sprinting.(我擅於短跑。或者可以说「sprinting is my expertise」) I once have been a committee of sports,a discipline inspector and also a group leader at school. I get on well with my classmates.(我和同学相处很好) I get on well with my parents too. Although there are some quarrels sometimes(虽然偶尔会吵架), I always tell some jokes and make them happy. I have a happy family, also I have my beloved(或者 dearest) parents who love me, and have teachers and friends who take care of me. This is the end of my introduction. Thank you!

Answer 2

翻译太简单了，何况我ip，其他人会帮你翻译的。
我针对你的介绍提点意见：
1. ...是个女孩...
这个可以省略。既然是面试，就不用了，除非考官是瞎子。
2. ...只是偶尔会闹些小矛盾...
这个可以省略了。考官对此不感兴趣。何况你介绍这个对你也没好处。

Answer 3

Hello!Teachers and students.Please allow me to introduce myself.My name is ***,I am a girl of 12 .I am from ***.I like culture of China and South Korea,and I can speak a little Korean.My hobbies are singing,dancing,speaking Korean and playing computer games.I am good at dash.I was ever made sports committee member,discipline committee member,head of group in school.I get on well with my classmates in school and family memembers at home,though I make trouble sometimes.And I often make everybody around me happy by telling some jokes.I have a happy family.My parents,teachers and classmates love and care for me so much.That's all,thank you!