假设你是李华,你在报纸上看到一家麦当劳招聘信息,请你根据的以下要点提示给负责人写一份应聘的电子邮件

假设你是李华,你在报纸上看到一家麦当劳招聘信息,请你根据的以下要点提示给负责人写一份应聘的电子邮件。 1个人信息:男,18岁 2:希望寒假能去兼职,从中得到社会实践(social practice) 3:询问更多关于该工作的信,如:工作时间,报酬等。词数:100 (英语作文)

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advertisement for a temporary position as a waiter. I am a 17-year-old student of Senior Two in a middle school. I will be able to work during July and August.
I worked as a waiter at a McDonald’s during the last summer vacation. From my working experience, I learned a lot. I am now good at using the computer. Also, I enjoy working with people and I am interested in the catering service.
I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the position available.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

试题分析:这是一封求职信,所以要用第一人称来写。写作时不能只是生硬的逐条翻译,一定根据内容要点适当发挥。需要注意不要偏离文章中心,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求字数,100词左右。
点评:本文属于书信类作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to your advertisement for a temporary position as a waiter. I am a 17-year-old student of Senior Two in a middle school. I will be able to work during July and August.
I worked as a waiter at a McDonald’s during the last summer vacation. From my working experience, I learned a lot. I am now good at using the computer. Also, I enjoy working with people and I am interested in the catering service.
I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the position available.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua追问

这篇我看过了,不太符合,因为他还没去实践过

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