英语翻译（高分悬赏）

Question

***你好！我叫***，在****年被**大学**专业录取，由于家庭经济状况不好，曾使我一度犯愁。在此之际，是您伸出了援助之手，帮我度过危难，在此我谨代表我和我的家人想您表示最诚挚的感谢，并祝您身体健康，一切安好！

大概内容就这样，可自由发挥！关键语法要正确，本人英语语法不精，在此恳求哪位大侠指教！

Answer 1

XXX,hello,I am XXX, by name,was accepted by XXXuniversity xxx major,due to family economic condition is out , at this time, It is you who stretch out a helping hand,helped me out of the pinch, I express the most hearty thank on behalf my family and me seriously, wish you good health.,all well

Answer 2

*** hello! I call ***, in the **** year by ** university ** specialized enrollment, because the family financial circumstances are not good, once caused me once to worry. When this, was you have stretched out hand of the aid, helped me to pass the danger, here I represented me and my family member sincerely thought that you expressed sincerest thanks, and wished your health, all well!

Answer 3

hello! I call , university in , because professional admitted family finances is bad, I was overwhelmed. In the meantime, you are extending a helping hand, help me through the danger, I, on behalf of my family and I want you to say the most sincere thanks and wish you a good health, everything!
^_^

Answer 4

Dear Sir,

Have a nice day!

My name is ***, entering the **colleague of ***university in **. As my family has too bad economic condition to afford my tuition fee , once I have been worired if I can finish my study. At that time, you do me a favor and i can get the chance of further study. Hereby,on behalf of my families and especially myself, I'd like to express my sincere appreciation to you, and hope everything is well on you.

Yours truthfully,
**