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Question

本论文结合自己进行毕业设计动画短片的故事创作经验教训，总结出关于取材时所要注意的要点和后期改善剧本的方法。通过观看历届毕业设计作品，对比其他一些优秀的动画短片，归纳出其中普遍认为存在的弊端，继而提高故事质量，为动画前期工作提供参考，可以让作品避免雷同和营造动画取材方面的百花齐放局面。

Answer 1

In this paper the graduation design on himself the animated short story writing experiences and lessons, and summarizes drawn to note about the points and later the method to improve script. Graduation design by looking at previous works, compared with other some excellent animated short, concludes that the disadvantages of common story, then improve the quality, provide a reference for animation prophase work, can let works to avoid similar and build animation drawn aspects of flowering situation.

Answer 2

In this paper the graduation design on himself the animated short story writing experiences and lessons, and summarizes drawn to note about the points and later the method to improve script. Graduation design by looking at previous works, compared with other some excellent animated short, concludes that the disadvantages of common story, then improve the quality, provide a reference for animation prophase work, can let works to avoid similar and build animation drawn aspects of flowering situation.
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