请问这句话有没有语法错误

Question

it is important that an IT expert who has better understanding of ICT technologies and issues and participates the final decisions making will make IT resources better supporting the business.
请问这句话有没有语法错误？如果有怎么改正？

Answer 1

1.participate 少了介词 in
2.supporting 最好改成support 是一直存在的客观事实，不是正在发生的。
总觉得读起来有点别扭，我觉得改成:it is important for an IT expert who has better understanding of ICT technologies and issues and participates the final decisions making to make IT resources better support the business.比从句读起来舒服。

楼上的误人子弟，that后接的从句连谓语都没了，better at 少了at ，understandings是名词了understanding! which引导的定语从句乱用,导致谓语缺失。

Answer 2

it is important that 后面是一个宾语从句，who引导的是一个定义从句修饰expert，understanding在这是个名词，understanding of ICT technologies and issues 对ICT技术和问题的理解，and is participated in the final decisions making 并参与的最终的决策中， will make IT resources better support the business，make 后面加动词原形，better做状语修饰support，这句话简单点就是it is important that an IT expert will make ........鄙人之见，仅供参考

Answer 3

少了一个,

Answer 4

It is important that an IT expert who is better understandings of ICT technologies and issues and participating the final decisions which make IT resource better for business supporting