今天就要用啦。小升初的英语面试自我介绍。请好心人帮忙修改下吧！谢谢各位！！5月20日

Question

Hello everyone ,My name is hubo and my English name is Miffy.
I'm 12 years old.
I come from Chuiyangliu center school.
My personality is bright, taking pleasure in help others.
I like reading books,to speak and skating.
I hope I can have a colourful live in middle school,to pursue my study and develope myself, I think if I can study in your school ,I will have a better future.So I will have more confidence to study hard.
大家帮忙看看有没有什么语法错误或者什么的，帮忙改一下好么？好的还有悬赏分。急求啊。谢谢各位了！明天就要用了。

Answer 1

开头用Good moning teachers. Hello,太随便了
taking pleasure in help others.改成 I like to help others.
I like reading books,to speak and skating.改成I like reading books,speaking and skating.
后面改成I hope I can have a colourful life in middle school,pursue my studies and inprove myself, I believe if I study in your school ,I will have more confidence to study hard in a good atmosphere So I will have a bright future. 我相信如果我在你们学校读书的话，会让我在良好的氛围里更有自信的去努力学习。为此，我将有一个更光明的未来。

Answer 2

大家好,我的名字是在选择,我的英文名字叫Miffy。

我今年12岁。

我来自Chuiyangliu中心学校。

我性格开朗,以高兴地帮助别人。

我喜欢读书、说与滑冰。

我希望我能有一个五彩缤纷的生活在中学,去追求我的研究和发展自己,我想如果我能学习你的学校,我将会有一个更好的未来。所以我将更有信心去努力学习。