达人来翻译歌词！！不要机器翻译的！

Question

请英语达人把以下的歌词翻译一下（谢绝机器翻译） ！
尽量翻译的贴切一些，有韵味一点！
翻译的比较好的给加分！！
这是MV地址：http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XNDE1NDA2NDg=.html
要是想感受一下歌曲的感情可以听一下！
Right Here (Departed)

When you feel your hearts guarded
And you see the breaks starting
When the clouds are far departed
U'll be right here with me

B rock...
Darkchild..（这是人名 ，不用翻）
We back..
U'll be right here with me

You'll be right here with me
oh, oh x16
You'll be right here with me

When your life is going to fast,
off the train tracks
I can slow it down, oh
just when you think your bout to turn back
'Stead you might crash
I'll be your ground, oh

oh when you feel your hearts guarded
and you see the brakes started
and when the clouds above Departed
you'll be right here with me
and when your tears are dry from crying
and when the worlds turned silent
so when the clouds above Departed
you will be right here with me.

oh oh x10
(x2)
i will be right here with you
you'll be right here with me

when your trapped and there's just no key
and you can't breathe
i breathe for you
the fire's got you down on both knees
and the walls are closing in but i will
break it through
and when you feel alone
im a be at home
whenevers comes and go
you know i got you

oh when you feel your hearts guarded
and when you see the brakes started
and when the clouds above Departed
you'll be right here with me
(you'll see the sun)
and when your tears are dry from crying, crying
and when the worlds turned silent, silent
so when the clouds above Departed
you will be right here with me.

I will be here right beside you
every step you take, yea
i will be your strength your shelter
shield you from the rain

(x2)
(oh when you feel), oh when you feel your hearts guarded
and when you see the brakes started
and when the clouds above Departed
you'll be right here with me (right here)
and when your tears are dry from crying
and when the worlds turned silent
so when the clouds above Departed
you will be right here with me.

(x4)
i will be right here with you
you'll be right here with me

yea
我说了翻译得好的我会给加分！！
如果没有翻译得好的，那我还浪费什么？
我这人不算小气，只不过不见兔子不撒鹰！

Answer 1

没分数没动力。。。四级都给0分，比我还小气
唉 最近太懒太没成就感
给你翻一个两分版本的

When you feel your hearts guarded
And you see the breaks starting
When the clouds are far departed
U'll be right here with me
当你发现自己心门紧缩
放你看到离别即将到来
当乌云驱散
你在这里 在我左右

B rock...
Darkchild..（这是人名 ，不用翻）
We back..
U'll be right here with me
rock吧
我的小黑（我就翻）
回来吧
在这里 在我左右

You'll be right here with me
oh, oh x16
You'll be right here with me

你会在这里 在我的左右
哦 哦 x16
你会在这里 在我的左右