谁帮我翻译一下这段关于腐败的英语论文（好的话可加分！）

Question

最近20年来，腐败现在变得越来越严重，甚至改变了我们的生活。
现在社会的生活水平越来越发达，竞争越来越激烈人们的压力同样也越来越大。
人们需要在这个复杂的社会中更好的生存，所以这就导致勒腐败的产生。
人们，特别是那些有这社会地位的当官者们就会利用自己的权利来不顾他人利益来满足自己以及自己身边的人利益。导致这种现象的原因主要有3点，第一，人们需要更多的金钱来满足自己的日常需求，第二，人们贪婪的心是无限的为了达到目的会不惜一切代价，比如买一些奢侈品来丰富自己的生活。第三，面对亲戚朋友，在处理关系的时候往往会利用自己的权利来帮助。比如面对自己亲戚朋友的就业问题，往往会更多的考虑自己的亲戚朋友，而不会把机会让给那些更有能力的人。
这样一来，对大多数人来讲是不公平的，对国家长期的发展都是不利的，第一，这样国家会有相当大的一笔资金流失，第二国家的发展得不到有效的发展。第三，得不到真正有能力的人才的帮助。
这样长时间发展下去会打倒难以估量的损失！

（这是我随便乱写的，高手们可以帮我修改修改，当然要翻译成英语咯···明天要检查···拜托各位速度帮忙呀···最后还有一个总结和自己的观点没有写···）

Answer 1

In recent 20 years, corruption has become so rampant in our society that it has profoundly impacted our lives.

As the economy quickly develops, competition has grown more fierce and brought greater pressure on people. Consequently corruption has become the convenient springboard for people to achieve financial success sooner, especially for government officials with high social status, who exploited public resources for their
own personal goals.

There are 3 factors that contribute to corruptions:

1. money
People need more money to support their daily needs.

2. greed
The material temptations that the society now offer
are so great that it entices people to do anything including bending rules to live luxury lives.

3. favoritism
Government officials often use their power to assist
their close relatives as well as affiliates with matters like employment, instead of picking the right
people for the jobs.

Such practices, as we know, are unjust to most of us who play by the rules, and in the long run, are detrimental to the country's development.
Corruptions threatens China's economic growth with billions of government revenues disappeared into the government officials' personal pockets. Such practices
are demotivating to talented people who are not recognized for their contribution to the development of the country.

My personal opinion on the corruption issue,
1st, lack of independent justice system that can
enforce the law without fear of retaliation

2nd, inadequate separation between government
and business. Many government officials have shares in
lucrative businesses such as coal mining, which provides perfect breeding ground for bribery, extortion and favoritism etc.

3rd, low salaries for government officials
When government officials are not paid well,
that leaves door open for corruption.

4th, lack of election system for high ranking government officials
Because all the high-ranking government are
appointed by party leaders, instead of being
elected by the public, they feel no obligation
to serve the welfare of the public. Rather they
would seize the power and access they have for
their own needs.

5th, lack of independent auditors to investigate
money laundering issues

Answer 2

In recent 20 years,nowadays corruption becomes worse and worse, and even changes our lives.
Now society living standard developes higher and higher, and competition becomes stronger and stronger, meanwhile people's pressure grow biger and biger.

People need to live better in such complex society, so that corruption is caused.

People, especially those officers who have good society position,will make use of their authority to meet their own and their relatives' requirements regardless of others' benefits. 3 following factors cause this phenomena. First, people need more money to satisfy their daily requirements. Second, people's greedy desire is endless, they will try all their efforts to achieve their aims, such as buying some luxury commodity to enrich their lives. Third, for their relatives and friends, they usually help them with their authorities to maintain their relationships, such as employment issues of their relatives and friends, they usually concern more about their relatives and friends, and couldn't let chances come to the talented persons.

Therefore, this phenomena is unfair to majorIty, and do harm to country's future development. Firstly, such country will lost fairly big financing.Secondly, the country couldn't develop effectively. Thirdly, talented persons' assistant can't be got

Unvalued losses will be caused on conditions that such phenomena continues in a long-term .