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Question

我写了一封信，但是肯定有一些低级语法错误，可是却基本不懂语法，帮忙改动一下。（在保证正确的前提下，改动处越少越好）。谢谢！！

改好加分哦！

Dear Mingji:
How excited I am.,when I write this letter to you.Because,it is the frist time I write to a foreign girl.
Form my piont of view,what a cute girl you are! A gril whom worth I trust,cherish,care for regardless the distance.
My present life as quiet as a cup of water without passion,no depression.The only thing makes me pressured is the cet-6.But I always try to keep smell stay on my face.And I recommend you do the same.
Generally speaking ,our assignment isn’t very heavy.In fact,very easy to deal with.There is so much pressure when we at middle school and senior school,we all studying very hard,and almost have no leisure.But now,the stric discipline mever come again.We can graduate easily.So they willing to do what they want.Haha,we have a plenty of leisure time.My roommaters always spend ot on computer games rather than studying.Our dormitory always full of laugh and cheer!Sometimes a little noise.I may play with them,but never forget my dream,my ultimate ambition.
Min,I am afraid I have no chance to go to Korea to meet you for some reasons.But I look forward to the day you come China again.Do you know,I expect so much to have chances to go hiking,traveling and some more interesting things.If you come here again,I would like to be your guide,such large our country is,with a lot of sceneries and so much delicious food.We can try some food new, some food are even new for me!(For instance,a classmater who come from HuNan province bring me some piece of snack which is made from a certain kind of tree’s fruit.you may drunken after chew it.ha..)Besides,believe it or not,I am a good cook in myself!haha.In average,people in China is very enthusiastic,I welcome you,and believe you will love China!
You once advised me to study your Korean.But I am fear that I won’t do it well.I know it’s a long-term process.I had the experience studying Japanese.That’s too difficult for me!That’s why I am so surprised to know you studying so much kind of languages.Meanwhile,that’s the reason I call you”super girl”!I know you are an aggressive girl,I believe you will achieve your dream in the end!
Min,you will go to Mexico a few days later for studying.I remind you again:take care of yourself and have your diet on time,don’t make me worry you!
I have a lot of things want to tell you,and I will when the day my English is good enough.Tell me yours!

Answer 1

Dear Mingji:
How excited I am.,when I write this letter to you.Because,it is the frist time I has writen to a foreign girl.
From my piont of view,what a cute girl you are! A gril whom worth trusting,cherish,care for regardless the distance.
My present life as quiet as a cup of water without passion,and no depression.The only thing makes me pressured is the cet-6.But I always try to keep smile stay on my face.And I recommend you to do the it as well.
Generally speaking ,our assignment isn’t very heavy.In fact,it is very easy to deal with.There is so much pressure when we at middle school and senior school.We all study very hard,and almost have no leisure.But now,the strict discipline has never come again.We can graduate easily.So they are willing to do what they want.Haha,we have a plenty of free time.My roommates always spend on computer games rather than study.Our dormitory always full of laughter and cheer!Sometimes I made a little noise.I may play with them,but never forget my dream,my ultimate ambition.
Min,I am afraid I have no chance to go to Korea to meet you for some reasons.But I look forward to the day you come to China again.Do you know that I expect so much to have chanceto go hiking,traveling and some more interesting things?If you come here again,I would like to be your guide,such large our country is,with a lot of sceneries and so much delicious food.We can try some new food, some food are even new for me!(For instance,a classmate who came from HuNan province brought me some piece of snack made from a certain kind of fruit of the trees.you may be drunken after chew it.ha..)Besides,believe it or not,I am a good cook !haha.In average,people in China are very enthusiastic.I welcome you,and believe you will love China!
You once advised me to study your Korean.But I feared that I won’t do it well.I know it’s a long-term process.I had the experience about studying Japanese.That’s too difficult for me!That’s why I am so surprised to know you to have studied so many kinds of languages.Meanwhile,that’s the reason I called you"super girl”!I know you are an aggressive girl,I believe you will achieve your dream in the end!
Min,you saidyou would go to Mexico a few days later for study.I remind you again:takeing care of yourself and haveing
your diet on time,and not to make me worry about you!
I have a lot of things want to tell you,and I will tell you when my English is good enough.And could tell me yours?

Answer 2

....改不过来了。
CET-6的人水平不应该这样啊。 单词拼写还能错。