100分，帮忙检查英语句子，在线等，越快越好

Question

帮我检查一下下面的句子是否有错.谢谢了！

1.I`m just bored with my hard work and want to relax.
我只是厌倦繁重的工作，想放松放松
2.There is a lot of sunshine there all year round.
那常年阳光普照
3.I`m in charge of overseas markets.
我负责海外市场
4.You can contact me any day.
你可以在任何一天联系我.
5.One moment , please.
请稍等.
6.Can I help you ?
你有时吗？
7.Could I leave a message?
我能留个口信吗？
8.Thank you for your advice.
谢谢你的建议
9.Could you fill in this form?
你能填写这个表格吗？
10.I prefer to spend my holidays abroad.
我更喜欢去国外度假.
11.They used to be doctors and now they are retired.
他们过去是医生，现在退休了.
12.Mr.Smith is occupied at the moment.
史密斯先生此刻正忙着呢.
13.let me see if he is available .
我看看他在不在.
14.I suppose so .
我想是这样的.
15.Mr.Brown is on another line now.
布朗先生正在借另一个电话.
16.Your products are of great interest to me .
我对贵公司产品很感兴趣.

Answer 1

1 I was just tired of the heavy work, like to relax
2 The sunny perennial.我觉得这样更简单
3 I am responsible for the overseas market。responsible一词挺不错
4 You can contact me at any day.应该加个at吧
5 Please wait.这样更口语和简单
7 Can I leave a message?
8 Thank you for your proposal.
9 Can you fill in this form it?
11 They used to be a doctor, now retired.
15 Mr. Brown is to take another call.
16 I am very interested in your product.
希望帮到你

Answer 2

10.I prefer to spend my holidays abroad.
我更喜欢去国外度假.
I like to spend my holidays abroad better.
你的prefer感觉用的不地道。
11.They used to be doctors and now they are retired.
把are删掉
他们过去是医生，现在退休了.
12.Mr.Smith is occupied at the moment.
史密斯先生此刻正忙着呢.
occupied改成busy就可以了。

Answer 3

4.You can contact me any day.
你可以在任何一天联系我. /你可以随时联系我。
6.Can I help you ?
你有时吗？/ 需要什么吗？/需要帮忙吗？这句话的翻译最灵活，因情况和场合而异。
其他翻译都挺好的。

Answer 4

第6句打错字了，应该是“有事”，或者更有礼貌的翻译“有什么可以帮到你的？”
13句根据语境也可以是“我看看他现在有没有空。”
15句也是打错字啦，不是“借”，是“接”

其他都没问题的。

Answer 5

个人观点：第四句应改为on any day
第五句应改为Just a moment,please.
其他应该都正确

Answer 6

正确