一篇英语作文，请帮我看下有没有什么错误。
包括语法错误，时态错误，甚至大小写。
错误请纠正。没错请说明。谢谢。
Yesterday I read a book named Cinderella.It is about a girl called Cinderella,her new mother,her new sister and a prince.Cinderella is beautiful,kindhearted and helpful. She is also very clever.But her new mother and new sister don't like her .They even abuse Cinderella. They always order Cinderella to do many housework in a short time. One day Castle Prince issued invitations, invite in families of the girls "Royal Palace will be open ball,and you must come" .Cinderella wasn't happy. She had many work to do so she can't participate in the Prince's ball.But an old lady helped her with a magic. Finally,Cinderella and Prince marriage ceremony, a grand scene,a hot topic,blessing sound are everywhere.She henceforth live happily ever after life.
There is a byword in China," goodness necessitates a sharing of itself,one good turn deseves another." It means se should be kind to the others.We should be kind and helpful as Cinderella,and we will live happily.
One day I read a news: When an old lady crossed the road,she tripped on someting and fell.a kindhearted taxi driver took her to the hospital.The old lady was very sensation.I think the driver is helpful and goodness.I will model myself after the driver and Cinderella.
The story <Cinderella> bring me a lot of affections and enlightenment.I will remember this wonderful fairy tale.
如果写的不好也不要浪费口水来骂了。
这不是我写的。
是我朋友拜托我发上来的。
PS:请速度，有追加悬赏。
其次，有些地方多余的我删除了；像两个one day的情况，我用remind...代替了，就说这个故事让我想起来这么一则新闻。
如有问题，欢迎给我发信息。
Yesterday I read a book named Cinderella. Cinderella is beautiful and kindhearted girl. She is also very clever. But her stepmother and stepsister don't like her .They even abuse Cinderella. They always order Cinderella to do much housework in a short time. One day Castle Prince issued an invitation to the girls: "Royal Palace will be open ball, and you must come". Cinderella had too much work to do so she couldn’t join in the Prince's ball. Luckily, an old lady helped her with magic. Finally, Cinderella and Prince got married. Since then they live happily.
As the Chinese saying goes, “goodness necessitates a sharing of itself, one good turn deserves another." It means we should be kind to the others. We should be kind and helpful as Cinderella, and we will live happily.
The story Cinderella reminds me of a piece of news: When an old lady crossed the road, she fell off. At that time, a taxi driver took her to the hospital. The old lady was very deeply moved. I think the driver is helpful and kind-hearted. He is our example.
The story <Cinderella> brings me a lot of affections and enlightenment. I will remember this wonderful fairy tale.
2. invite 此处应为现在分词作状语，应用 inviting
3. work 也是不可数名词，其前应用 much
4. can't 时态应与前面一致 改为 couldn't
5. fell 之后用逗号
6. goodness 应该为 kind-hearted
7. bring 应为三单
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