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Question

亚楠，你看上去漂亮了。
Ya-nan, you look so beautiful today.
是吗？可能是因为最近睡眠好的原因吧。
Really? Probably because of the good sleep recently. 有可能，你的皮肤看起来很红润。
yes, you know The good rest can cause the human facial expression to be good ,so your skin looks very ruddy.
可是我对自己的外貌还是不满意。
But I am still not satisfied with my appearance
不满意？为什么？
Dissatisfied? Why? I think you are beautiful enough
我的身材还是有一点胖。
but I feel my body looks a bit fat.

你在开玩笑？那你认为我怎样呢？我比你胖多了。而且我的皮肤黑且五官不美丽，
Are you kidding? How do you think me? I am much fatter than you . Moreover my skin is black and features are not beautiful,
哦我的朋友，哪有你讲的那么严重，我不认为你外貌有那么多缺点。
Oh my friend, You're too serious，I don't think you have so many shortcomings of appearance。
在我看来就有啊，我希望自己皮肤白点，身材瘦点。
But In my opinion it is the trueth. I wish my skin could become whiter and my Figure could become thinner.
照你的要求，你就变成一个完美的人了。
According to your requirement, you will become a
perfect person.
我不要求完美，只是希望不要再有人说我皮肤黑，大腿粗就行，因为这让我很没有自信。你就不同了，是公认的美女。
I do not ask to be perfect, just hope nobady would say me skin is so black and leg is so fat，which makes me so unsureness. But You will be different, You are recognized as a beautiful girl.
其实，我认为，相貌对一个人不重要，自信和修养才能体现一个人真正的美丽。我们不能只关注自己的外在，也要提高自己的内在美。but I think that the appearance of a person is not important, self-confidence and self-cultivation in order to realize the true beauty of a person. And We can not only concerned with our own external, but also enhance our inner beauty
你是对的，谢谢你的鼓励，我会加油的，我也相信自己会变得很棒。
Well, you are right. thank you for your encouragement and I will refuel, I also believe that I will become better。
你一定会。
You must be .

语法和用词不当，拜托了，急用！

Answer 1

是吗？可能是因为最近睡眠好的原因吧。
Really? Probably because of the recent good sleep.

有可能，你的皮肤看起来很红润。
yes, your skin looks very rosy.

我的身材还是有一点胖。
but I am a little bit fat.

你在开玩笑？那你认为我怎样呢？我比你胖多了。而且我的皮肤黑且五官不美丽，
Are you kidding? How do you think about me? I am much fatter than you. Moreover, my skin is black and I am ordinary.

哦我的朋友，哪有你讲的那么严重，我不认为你外貌有那么多缺点。
Oh my friend, you are laying it on bit，I think you are great.

在我看来就有啊，我希望自己皮肤白点，身材瘦点。
But I wish I am whiter and slimmer.

照你的要求，你就变成一个完美的人了。
According to your standard, you will be perfect.

我不要求完美，只是希望不要再有人说我皮肤黑，大腿粗就行，因为这让我很没有自信。你就不同了，是公认的美女。
I do not mean perfectness, just hoping that nobody would criticize my black skin and thick legs. 'cause it makes me so unsureness. But you are different, you are recognized as a beautiful girl.

其实，我认为，相貌对一个人不重要，自信和修养才能体现一个人真正的美丽。我们不能只关注自己的外在，也要提高自己的内在美。but I think that the Actually, in my opintion, real beauty lies not in the physical appearance, but in the heart. From this point, real beauty comes from learning and loving in the ways of life.

你是对的，谢谢你的鼓励，我会加油的，我也相信自己会变得很棒。
Well, you are right. thank you for your encouragement and I will work hard, and I believe that I will be great.

你一定会。
Definitely，you will.

部分意译了，有些直接翻译的话太中式了。希望能帮到你~