题目My lifestyle I never exercise i never drink milk i eat fruit and vegetables three or four times a week i sleep for nine hours every night i think i'm healthy求高手改进下就OK了
求高手帮我修改这篇英语作文(CET4)
in getting close to and heating from so many teengers shi kept hearing about this very emotionally packed tine that begins with application to college and extends through the four-year experience. 中的reason要复数。 if the students love the teacher改为students love their teachers会更...
能帮我改改这篇英语作文吗,,极其的感谢~~~
1, Dear dad: As the Thanksgiving Days is coming, I think you must be the first man through all my life I ought to express my gratitude.You did so much for me not only in material but also in psychology. Due to my silent character, I have never bothered you even wit...
请专业人士帮我修改一下这篇英语作文。
初中你这个水平就不错了,但是hobby这个词不要滥用,我给你来个大学水平的.As a staunch advocate of healthier living, I find many students in my class developed bad eating habits which I'd like to address by providing some useful advices.Many students often skip their breakfast and belie...
请高手帮我修改下这篇英语作文,是否有语法和句式错误
2. more faster and comfortable 中faster已经是比较级了,所以不能加more而应该加much,comfortable是多音节词因此比较级加more是对的。因此应改为much faster and more comfortable 3.would like to do所以应改为But I'd like to ride a bike.4.好像现在分词短语不能作句子(只有在生活英语或口语...
帮我修改这篇英语作文!谢谢…
son crocodile is so called the soil dragon, is only one crocodile in China to grow.BE produce in only once downstream in Yangtze River take, originally Chinese there is also moreover a kind of crocodile namely the gulf crocodile, but destroy completely already, so the 扬 son ...
我自己写的一篇四级英语作文,请高手帮忙在原文的基础上修改,纠正语法错 ...
trash around the environment, and have started to use shopping bags more than before.All in all, there are many advantages to limiting the use of disposable plastic bags and we should stick to it.语法错误都帮你改了,词语也给你换了一些好一点的~我是美国学校的学生,你放心吧~...
请英语高手帮忙修改英语作文。。(很着急)
Summer si coming.In this hot summer holiday.Why not go to the Shenzhen city.Shenzhen is a model cities. It is very beautiful.The trees is brown.You can smell flowers exhale a pleasant perfume.Splendid China is one of the beautiful scenic areas of Shenzhen.It is the biggest ...
帮我修改一下这篇英语作文。
抱歉,因为你里面写的,可能是单词用错了,我没读懂。我按照我理解的,给你改了一下。中文英文都有,你可以自己对一下是不是跟你的意思一样。如果不对可以再找我。呵呵~~~如下:My own Hello! I'm glad to meet you here! My name is Chen Kaiyan. My English name is Melody. My birthday...
帮我修改一下这篇英语作文谢谢
Dear new international students,I am the librarian of our university. I would like to present you with some information about the library as the best service of our library.Firstly, the library opens at 8:30 a.m. and closes at 9:30 p.m. everday. To make sure that you ...
大家好~这篇英语作文大家帮我改改吧 感激不尽 说哪里有错误就好 剩...
英文信不用首行空格,也不要居中,都左对齐就好了, 帮你略作修改,总体感觉内容太空洞了。Dear Sir or Madam,I, the undersigned, am a senior teacher in the Department of Computer Science at XX University. I'm writing this letter to recommend Zhang Hua, one of my students, for an ...