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Dear new international students,

I am the librarian of our university. I would like to present you with some information about the library as the best service of our library.
Firstly, the library opens at 8:30 a.m. and closes at 9:30 p.m. everday. To make sure that you arrange our time wisely, please bear this information in mind.
Secondly, every student can borrow five books at most from the library and you are free to keep them for one month at most before renewing them. If you renew the books, you can keep them for another half month, but each book can only be renewed once.
Last but not least, for other reader's sake, please take a good care of the books in the library and do not write anything on them.
Enjoy your reading here

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
September 30th

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