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帮我修改一下这篇英语作文。
My own Hello! I'm glad to meet you here! My name is Chen Kaiyan. My English name is Melody. My birthday is on April 24, 1996. I am a girl, I am 13 years old, the primary school in second. On weekends, I also want to go shopping, listen to music, and playing co...
各位大神,帮我修改下这篇英语作文吧!!!~~~
□ Under the current employment situation is grim, continue to graduate school is probably a good way to avoid risks.1、Under是介词,不能引导从句,改为——As the current employment situation is grim, (由于当前就业形势十分严峻)2、句子不完整,改为it is … that句型——it is proba...
英语作文:请帮我修改一下,谢谢!
首先,because不能用来开始一个句子 It is because a film usually (有些电影超长的 所以说usually,通常) for a couple hours, we can learn the original work in a much shorter time. Most of us would agree that watching films are more interesting than reading books. This is the main ...
请大家帮我修改一下这篇英语作文(初三水平)
a donate excise,这个表达有点费解,我觉得换成 a donate activity一场捐赠活动 From May 20th to May 22th,在一个句子里面的状语部分From 要换成from 既然前面提到的是There will a donate activity...那么后面这句接的就是活动,不是人啦,所以要将we 换成It 一个半小时的说法: one and a ...
帮我修改一下英语作文,谢谢,有什么毛病都指出来
They will get correct conclude which after discussion这句话也不对,应该改成这样:They will get correct conclusions after discussion.后面的也不对,应该是:So they can learn from each other 后面的compare with this two ways也不对,应该是comparing these two ways, I prefer to work in ...
帮我修改一下这篇英语作文谢谢
Dear new international students,I am the librarian of our university. I would like to present you with some information about the library as the best service of our library.Firstly, the library opens at 8:30 a.m. and closes at 9:30 p.m. everday. To make sure that you ...
初一英语作文,大家帮我改改,谢谢了。
I usually read a book in the morning .Afternoon. I got to school.The weather became cloudy .I thought it was going to rain.In the evening.Really it's rainy!I didn’t have an umbrella with me. I was unhappy because I don't like rainy.(首先,这篇的时态很混乱,这是一个...
我写了一篇英语作文, 帮我修改一下好吗? 非常感谢你!
believe ‘where there's a will, there's a way.’Sometimes,I would turn to my teachers and my classmates for help . When I overcame a difficulty, I felt very happy and excited. So if we meet a difficulty, don't give up!挺好的~其实我也没做大改动,还是你的意思吧~~...
请帮我批改一下这篇英语作文,谢谢
建议由上至下为文章的顺序 maybe a lot of people the answer is yes 这句话有两个主语,可以改为maybe for a lot of people the answer is yes some people think that they don't ~ 用法不地道,英语中这种宾从有否定前置的用法,可以改为some people don't think ~(that 常省略)news...
帮我改下英语作文
Dear sir,I am Li Hua ,seventeen years old. I am from Anhui province of China . Nowadays,I am a student and learn English at school .I meet some questions .Under this environment,I feel lonely .There is some difficulty about my course . I can't communicate with others ...