帮我修改一下英语作文，谢谢，有什么毛病都指出来
Working Individually or Working in a team
There are basically two ways to get work .One is to work individually.In this way,they need to solve probilms in their own.Besides,they can plan for thenselves what to do.Working individually is benefits for us to have a habit of think indenpently.
The other way is to work in a team. In this way ,students can solve problems together.They will get correct conclude,which after disussion.So they can study each other and strenthen their power of cooperation.
Compare with this two ways .I prefre to work in a team .Actually,teamwork is more improtant in our life .Under normal circumstances,teanwork is reqeired in order to reached some aims
They will get correct conclude which after discussion这句话也不对，应该改成这样：They will get correct conclusions after discussion.后面的也不对，应该是：So they can learn from each other
后面的compare with this two ways也不对，应该是comparing these two ways, I prefer to work in a team.后面important拼写错误了，teamwork也拼写错误。最后一句改成：in order to achieve some goals
帮我修改一下英语作文,谢谢,有什么毛病都指出来
Working individually is benefits for us 这句话不对，应该改成这样：Working individually is beneficial for us to have a habit of thinking independengtly.They will get correct conclude which after discussion这句话也不对，应该改成这样：They will get correct conclusions after discussion.后面...
请帮我修改一下英语作文 ,谢谢,错误希望可以明确指出
1.confused and astonished这句话表达的不是太明确，感觉是作者astonished 2.imitate 是及物动词后可直接跟名词.整体写的不错，用的状语修饰的很好。
帮我修改一下这篇英语作文。
抱歉，因为你里面写的，可能是单词用错了，我没读懂。我按照我理解的，给你改了一下。中文英文都有，你可以自己对一下是不是跟你的意思一样。如果不对可以再找我。呵呵~~~如下:My own Hello! I'm glad to meet you here! My name is Chen Kaiyan. My English name is Melody. My birthday...
帮我改下英语作文
Dear sir,I am Li Hua ,seventeen years old. I am from Anhui province of China . Nowadays,I am a student and learn English at school .I meet some questions .Under this environment,I feel lonely .There is some difficulty about my course . I can't communicate with others ...
我写了一篇英语作文, 帮我修改一下好吗? 非常感谢你!
楼主，这是我修改后的版本，你来看看吧~~我能保证语法不错：When I meet a difficulty Everyone would meet a difficulty during his life. I have met a difficulty as well. For exemple,once I couldn't work out a maths problem, but I didn't give up. I thought over and over,...
请大家帮我改改英语作文。谢谢了,急!
Today is Monday.Now,it's very early.I'm sleep.In the morning is winday.I get up at(...o'clock),but the sun shining now.I go to the library and reading books.In the afternoon,it's cloudy.I go to school study.I think the weather wangt to go to rain.In the evening...
这是我写的一篇英语作文,帮我修改一下好吗? 万分感谢!
fight pollution. In my opinion, we can't pour the wast water into the river. We can't put the waste gas in the air as well.Therefore, I hope all of the people can be responsible for it so that our would will be more and more beautiful.水平有限，希望能帮到你 ...
我写的一篇英语作文帮麻烦修改下,谢谢
就像中文说，“你是是一个学生”，这样有两个谓语直接在一个句子逻辑上也是行不通的，所以用谓语动词的时候，要注意。另外就是vomit这个词，我常见的还是sickness这个单词（==个人能力不够）所以，最后我改成了Everytime, when I go to the toilet, I fell sickness .】Many teachers of school ...
谁帮我看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误,谢谢,有错帮忙说下正确句子...
Xue Ting （to去掉） take it to you.At last , （I also say “） Happy birthday to you!（”）.Yours ,Wendy 大致改了，有的直接改，没括出来 建议，so also then but very have to没必要用那么多 不要那么多逗号，把句子连起来，说话简洁点 LZ年纪应该不大，写成这样不错了 ...
初一英语作文帮忙修改下
She has two big ears, four big legs, a long nose and a very strong body. I like her very mush because she is very cute. However, she is a bit dangerous. She can attack people! Ling Ling relaxes four hours every day. Do you know what Ling Ling is? Let me tell you!
