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Our school life
I think our school life is colorful and wonderful. Because we have many actinties. You see, from Monday to Friday, there are many students play basketball on the playground after class. I was one of them. There are many other sports, too. I do believe life comes from sports. So I thank the school person in change of the sport item. I not only like our school but also the school life!
I think our school life is colorful and wonderful. Because we have many activities. We can play basketball , volleyball, and badminton in the playground after school . I like playing basketball best. I always practise playing basketball with my friends on Friday afternoon. There are many other activities, too. I do believe that life comes from sports. So I thank the teachers for the change of the sport item. My friends and I often help with each other , and the teachers are kind to us. I really enjoy the school life and I love my school!
给你改了很多呵
Our school life is colorful and wonderful.We have many activities in our school.From Monday to Friday,many students play basketball and soccer on the playground after class.I like sports very much. I think sports is one of the important parts of our life.I am not only like our school but also the school life!
单词拼错哦，检查一下activities,然后是语法的前后统一，你想刚才还说there are many students play basketball on the playground after class.为什么到了后面用I was one of them呢？
要说也是 I am one of them.
So I thank the school person in change of the sport item.这句话不要比较好，我没看懂= =
然后是最后一句，语法错误，be动词牢记在心呀！！
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这是我写的一篇英语作文,帮我修改一下好吗?非常感谢你!
too. I do believe that life comes from sports. So I thank the teachers for the change of the sport item. My friends and I often help with each other , and the teachers are kind to us. I really enjoy the school ...
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I would turn to my teachers and my classmates for help . When I overcame a difficulty, I felt very happy and excited. So if we meet a difficulty, don't give up!挺好的~其实我也没做大改动，还是你的意思吧~~
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water pollution noise pollution and air pollution. We must fight pollution. In my opinion, we can't pour the wast water into the river. We can't put the waste gas in the air as well.Therefore
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The moment I was praised by my mother My mother is the best person in my eyes. When I finished homework, my mother praised me. She said, ‘You're a struggling boy.’After finished, I washed dishes and my mother praised me again. She said, ‘You're a good boy.’He...
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trouble. 中try应用三单，tries。I think of he is a kind and honest person. 把of改为that I with to keep the friendship between Tony and I forever. with改为wish 另外把Tony and I 改为tony and me岂不更好？文中运用衔接词较好。若注意细节，你的文中应该会更成功！
一篇英语作文, 帮我修改一下好吗? 非常感谢你。
Last Sunday,I had my birthday.I received a special present which was bought by(加上了定于从句)my Dad.Opening the present,I was amamzed(用了非谓，在句中很提分).（要注意语序，先打开，才知道里面是什么）It was a dictionary.And(注意衔接)it was not only thick but （用了not o...
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后一句自然去掉。I also 一句改为：I also can enjoy my long summer vacation.这样更地道一些。后面几句写得很精彩，无需改动。解释一下去掉第一句的原因：在英语思维里，这一句纯属多余，很不严密，因为喜欢夏天的人大有人在，这样说会让人感到莫名其妙，并且表达方式也是中国式英语，不好。
我写了 一篇英语作文 帮我改写一下好吗? 非常感谢你。
Computer is becoming more and more popular Nowadays Computer is very popular throughout the world. Computer is very important in our daily life. For example, it can help us send e-mails to our friends, we can play computer games and listen to music by using computer. In ...
我写的一篇英语作文,请大家评价和修改一下,谢谢!
帮你改了一下 主体的意思没变 可能更流畅些 As teenagers, we live in a totally different world from our mothers` . We always have different opinions because of the lack of communication. Sometimes it even ends up with quarreling with each other.As far as I concerned,it is ...
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confidence to become better in many ways.i can feel the honest between he and i . i wish the friendship will between he and i last forever.其中楼主写的几句话感觉不是很对...所以用了自己的话来写了..我们当时的英语作文是16分..感觉楼主如果没有什么拼写错误的话有14分可以拿 ...
