我写的一篇英语作文，请大家评价和修改一下，谢谢！
Love Your mother
As teenagers,we live in a different world from our mother.We often have many different ideas because we are lack of communication,and sometimes we have a quarrel with each other.
But from my point of view,we can't do this.With our age growing,we should know how to make allowances for our mother.In fact,she ,makes you angry just because she loves you.
Mother will always around us when we are in trouble.please love her more than you love yourself.Life is meaningless without her.
As teenagers, we live in a totally different world from our mothers` . We always have different opinions because of the lack of communication. Sometimes it even ends up with quarreling with each other.
As far as I concerned,it is immature for us to argue with our mothers. As a grown-up, we should show understanding for our be loved mother because they love us, that is also why sometimes they upset us.
When man is in trouble, it is his mother who is always accompanying him. Mothers deserve to be loved more than anything because life is meaningless for us without company of them.
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water pollution noise pollution and air pollution. We must fight pollution. In my opinion, we can't pour the wast water into the river. We can't put the waste gas in the air as well.Therefore
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I think our school life is colorful and wonderful. Because we have many activities. We can play basketball , volleyball, and badminton in the playground after school . I like playing basketball best. I always practise playing basketba...
我写的一篇英语作文,请大家评价和修改一下,谢谢!
帮你改了一下 主体的意思没变 可能更流畅些 As teenagers, we live in a totally different world from our mothers` . We always have different opinions because of the lack of communication. Sometimes it even ends up with quarreling with each other.As far as I concerned,it is immatur...
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我写了一篇英语作文, 帮我修改一下好吗? 非常感谢你!
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As we know, TV plays an important part in our daily life. In my opinion, watching TV is good for us.Since it was invented, TV has been an important part of the modern life. It is also an important tool to spread culture and information. We can learn much knowledge from ...
我写了一篇英语作文,帮我修改一下好吗?非常感谢你!
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抱歉，因为你里面写的，可能是单词用错了，我没读懂。我按照我理解的，给你改了一下。中文英文都有，你可以自己对一下是不是跟你的意思一样。如果不对可以再找我。呵呵~~~如下:My own Hello! I'm glad to meet you here! My name is Chen Kaiyan. My English name is Melody. My birthday...
