求英文高手帮忙，做一篇作文，我语法很差，错误太多...
题目是这样的： 你（李元）的美国朋友Harry在最近的e-mail中提到要带他父母来华旅游，他们计划去黄山。给他回一封e-mai，内容包括：1、欢迎他的父母来中国；2、建议可行路线及交通方式；（可以胡编）3、提醒一些必要的旅行准备（如衣物、药品……）；4、推荐1至2处其他景点。
80个单词左右！
I had the honor to read your email the same day and I have known that you plan to leave for China with your parents for a tour to Huangshan Mountains. I suggest that you fly directly to Hefei, capital of Anhui Province, and then take a sight seeing bus from there. It is 280 kilometre from Hefei to huangshan. You'd better bring some raincoats with you, for it often rains there. Besides a camera needs carying with you; you see there are much beautiful scenery worthy of taking. Yupin Peak (玉屏峰) and Tiandu Peak (天都峰) are two of the most ones, so you might as well pay a vist to them at first. I am looking forward to your coming early.
with highest regards.
Your,
Liyuan
我当天就拜读了你的邮件并且知道你计划揩同你的父母来华到黄山旅游。我建议您直接飞往安徽首府合肥，然后从那里乘旅游车，从合肥到黄山只有280公里。你最好带上雨衣，那里经常下雨。另外你需要带一个照相机，你知道那里有好多美景要拍。玉屏峰和天都峰是最美的景色中的两处，你倒不妨先去看看。我正期待着你们早点儿到来。
李元敬上
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