请教高手中的高手，150字中译英。

Question

翻译下面150字的一段华，我将保持在线与各位联系，请不恁赐教！

××公司是一家多元化民营高新技术企业，拥有激光加工、多种电火花加工、超硬材料精密研磨及抛光、CVD金刚石制备、钻石刀轮、超硬刀具等方面的专业技术和日趋强大的生产能力。××不断致力于技术创新和应用领域的广泛拓展，并为机械、模具、金属加工、电子及声光器件、平板显示等领域提供重要创新产品。

专业词汇：
激光加工 laser cutting
电火花加工 EDM machining
超硬材料 super-hard materials
精密研磨 precision grinding
抛光 polishing
CVD金刚石 CVD diamond
钻石刀轮 diamond scribing wheels
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下面是我的翻译，请高手在此基础上继续润色，谢谢！
As a diversified hi-tech company, ×× has over 6 years hands-on expertise and ever-growing productivity in terms of laser cutting, various EDM machining, precision grinding and polishing, CVD diamond, diamond scribing wheels, super-hard cutting tools, etc. ×× is continuously committed to technical innovation and scientific discovery of market need. It focuses on major innovative products in the areas of mechanics, moulds, metal working, electronic and acousto-optic cells, flat panel display and so on.

Answer 1

楼主译文:As a diversified hi-tech company, ×× has over 6 years hands-on expertise and ever-growing productivity in terms of laser cutting, various EDM machining, precision grinding and polishing, CVD diamond, diamond scribing wheels, super-hard cutting tools, etc. ×× is continuously committed to technical innovation and scientific discovery of market need. It focuses on major innovative products in the areas of mechanics, moulds, metal working, electronic and acousto-optic cells, flat panel display and so on.

我的两点修改建议:
1.将over six years换为over six years'为好;
2.in the areas of mechanics,moulds，...改为in such areas as mechanics,moulds，...,并将结尾的and so on去掉,因为老外曾经告我说如果你用...and so on的话,说明你不知道自己接下来该说什么,该怎么说了。在正式的科技译文中应尽量避免此类模棱两可的含糊表达。

Answer 2

×× Company is a multi-oriented high-tech civilian-run Enterprises,
Our company has a business scope of laser cutting; several kinds of EDM machining; precision grinding and polishing of super-hard materials; CVD diamond generation; diamond scribing wheels etc.
We have professionalism of the above and increasing power of manufacturing.
×× Company is on continuous technical innovation and extensive exploitation of the applicable fields. And we provide vital innovative product in the fields of Mechanism; Moulding; Metal processing; Electronic&Acoustic-Optic appliances; Panel display etc.

Answer 3

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你翻译的很不错~~~~~
感觉作为公司介绍已经很不错啊·、

Answer 4

××The company is a multiplex privately operated high-tech enterprise, has the laser processing, the many kinds of electric spark machining, the ultra hard material precisely grinds and polishes, the CVD diamond preparation, the diamond knife turn, aspect the and so on ultra hard cutting tool specialized technology and day by day the formidable productivity. ×× unceasingly devotes to the technical innovation and the application domain widespread development, and for domain and so on machinery, mold, metal working, electron and acousto-optic component, panel display provides the important innovation product.

Answer 5

xx is a diverse privately-owned hi-tech company, with ever growing production capabilities, and over 6 years manufacturing experience and expertise in laser cutting, various EDM machining, precision grinding and polishing, as well as the making of CVD diamonds, diamond scribing wheels and super-hard cutting tools. xx is committed to continuous technological innovation and the discovery and expansion of markets for their application. xx is focused on bringing significant innovations to fields such as mechanics, moulding, metal processing, electronics and acousto-optic devices and flat panel displays.

Answer 6

XX is a diversified private high-tech enterprises have laser processing, multi-EDM. Precision Grinding and polishing superhard materials, preparation of CVD diamond, diamond cutter wheel. Tools such as the hardened professional skills and the growing capacity. XX continuing efforts in the field of technological innovation and application development, and machinery and equipment, metal processing. electronics and acousto-optic devices, flat panel display and other important areas of innovative products.