高分悬赏 求帮我看个英语作文 找下里面的语法错误 我知道很多 但麻烦大家了 马上四级了很着急 像这

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高分悬赏 求帮我看个英语作文 找下里面的语法错误 我知道很多 但麻烦大家了 马上四级了很着急 像这样的作文能得多少分呀

Answer 1

15分里大约7分，The Internet as \double-edged sword\,teenagers enjoy the great
information in network convenient conditions at the same time,also faces
a may kill the powerful and dangerous temptation and trap.This paper is
the cause of the addiction to the young students network from
curiosity,conformity heart,ZiBeiXin,rebellious attitude,to give vent to
heart,heart heart heart knowledge of six aspects analysis,and the
understanding of their from four aspects put forward a solution.

追问

那你说我应该怎么办呀 就这几天了

我应该看看基础语法书吗

追答

多背模板作文

追问

背模板也背不了那么多

也不知道考什么呀

追答

字要写大一些

Answer 2

第一句就错了

追答

as it is

要不然没主语

let him come

去掉to

let sb do sth

望采纳

they do not ask him drectly