英语语法问题，帮我看哪里语法不对要改的，谢谢。

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Good morning sir/madam, it's really my honor to have this opportunity for an interview .

I am John.

I recently graduated from XX Vocational and Technical College with learn Computer application technology

At college，I passed college english test band four and got National-level Mandarin Chinese ,level 2, grade A.

Besides studying I was very active on campus.

I joined the Computer Society

I also worked with Onetake as a Social Intern for a semester. I learned a lot about Video production and Management and Maintenance.

I could speak good english and skillful in using office software and Mysql database.

I am a gentle and careful person.meanwhile I have Strong determination to succeed.

I believe I’m a good fit for the Technical director position.

I believe I’m a good fit for the Technology section.

Thank you for the opportunity.

Thank u very much for your time

Answer 1

该句句意不清，语法错误多。试改为：John Lennon thought (that) growing up was a long way to go and a hard row to hoe. 约翰·列侬认为成长是一个漫长而又艰辛的过程。

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。。哪一句？